A shining halo on her head
guides every single step she dreads,
she wishes she could run instead,
all of her crumbled hopes are dead.
A future flashing in her mind,
an older groom, mostly unkind.
Both hands scrubbed raw from chores assigned,
no more tears left, silently cried.
Her dad is there, her mother too,
dismissing all her obvious blues.
So nonchalant with how she grew,
ignore her thoughts, forcing their views.
Slowly exhales, welcoming death,
suddenly wakes, still out of breath,
she sobs for those that go the length,
while praying she can gather strength.
Maybe someday forced love can end,
so no heart needs to play pretend.
Some are too young to comprehend,
how one wrong step quickly descends.
The warm sunlight, brightens her face,
clears up her mind, she finds her place,
an advocate for those displaced,
providing pure love filled with grace.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published on December 14, 2021
Sad but worth reading. Thanks Grace.
Thanks so much 💕
Wow, powerful and heartbreaking.
Thank you, Nicole 💕
This was heart breaking. Wonderfully you portrayed this, Grace. Great writing filled with grace 🩷
Thank you so much, dear Jan 💕
You are the most welcome always, dearest Grace 💕💕
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A beautiful verse filled with deep sorrow ❤️
Thank you so much 💕
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Oh my dear Grace how hauntingly beautiful. Love this, and thanks for sharing my dear. 🤗💖🥰
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it, dear friend.💕
Yes I did and you are so very welcome Grace! Cheers! 💖🥰🥂
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Hmm. This makes me very glad my wife and I married relatively late, took everyone else by surprise and completely defied expectations in getting together.
A sad start with an uplifting ending.
Thanks so much, Sadje 💕
You’re welcome
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Moving 💓
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So touching, Grace.
Thanks so much, K💕
Maybe someday forced love can end,… that’s the hope in sight. Love the inspiring ending. Well penned, Grace 😊💖
Glad you liked it, KK. Thank you so much 💕
Always my pleasure 💖
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A beautiful fragile truth in some lives led with the glimmer of hope Grace! ❣️ Let’s hope she finds it!
Thank you so much, Cindy. 💕🙏💕
A pleasure always💞
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Heartbreaking and well expressed, Grace!💞
Thank you so much 💕