Find sound words, to disguise,
all the purest emotions,
captured deep in the mind,
to form tales of devotion.
As each day passes by,
embrace peace or commotion.
Look up into the sky,
or stare through the vast ocean.
Close both heavy set eyes,
erase every old notion.
Fluttered wishes float high,
a self-formed locomotion.
Deep emotions take flight,
to create an implosion.
Twinkling stars shine so bright,
universal explosion.
Sense from both wrong and right,
sets true balance to motion.
What a beautiful sight,
once pure peace has been chosen.
Hopes floats high as a kite,
constant inner promotion.
Guides clear souls towards light,
warms hearts that were once frozen.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge #141 – May 02, 2023
Prompt – Commotion


As perhaps you intended, there is a comforting flow to your poem. I very much enjoyed it!
That’s so nice to hear, Suzette. Thanks so much 💕
My pleasure Grace! Cheers.
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Cool
Thank you 💕
“warms hearts that were once frozen”… a sense of warmth in your words that is indeed heartfelt 🙏🤍
Thank you so much , Destiny. So happy you enjoyed.💕
always a pleasure,,, 🤍
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Oh, how I love this, Grace!
And this stanza is glorious –
Sense from both wrong and right,
sets true balance to motion.
What a beautiful sight,
once pure peace has been chosen.
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Delighted to hear you enjoyed it, Eugenia. Thank you so much.💕
My pleasure, Grace!
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You’r words paint a picture of beauty so well delivered in poem Grace. Love this! 💞
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks a bunch 💕
You’re so welcome Grace!! ❣️
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So beautifully written Grace.
Thanks so much, Sadje 💕
My pleasure
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Last line is superb. A lovely poem, Grace! Well penned 👍💖
Thanks a bunch, dear KK.💕
My pleasure Grace 💖
Grace, this is lovely! I really enjoyed the last 4 lines, thanks for this.
Thank you so much. So happy you enjoyed it.💕
“embrace peace or commotion.”
Yup, it’s up to each which we embrace. I liked this. 👏
It sure is, Selma. Thanks so much.💕
Touching lyrics, friend Grace. Inspiration and hope are fortified by reading you. 🤗🤗🤗
So nice to hear. Thank you so much 💕
As hope rises, souls can soar high 💞💞💞 Beautifully written, Grace! 💞
Thanks so much 💕
Wow! Beautifully written, Grace.
Thanks so much, Indira.💕