A father could not be,
if not for a mother.
Siblings are all sisters,
if excluding their brothers.
Darkness will last all day
without bits of sunlight.
Night skies hold moon and stars,
as they twinkle and shine bright.
If all rain was erased,
the green fields would run dry,
fruitless deserts that ache,
hearing loud storm clouds cry.
Anger versus hate,
equally seen as crimes.
Pure love is left to fate,
carrying infinite ties.
Life will always exceed
what wisdom discovers,
one can hardly exist
without help from the other.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Beautiful thought gave me answers to some questions that I recently was trapped. Thank you for sharing.
This is so very nice to hear and makes me so happy. Thank you for the thoughtful feedback my friend.β€οΈ
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This is so beautifully balanced! I love all the paradoxes here and the powerful reminders throughout!!! And once again, there is such a dreamy, smooth and soothing flow to this piece, itβs just fabulous!! Keep up this magical, miraculous and amazing work, dear Grace…I know you will π€π€π€
Thank you so much, Ace. Your wonderful comments always put a smile on my face.So happy you enjoyed it my friend.πππ
Ahhhhh, I love the connectedness in this poem, dear Grace. Beautiful, as always!! β€οΈ
Thank you so much my dear friend.πππ
very nice
Thank you.β€οΈ
It’s so amazing..! Such a marvelous piece..! Very amazingly written my friend..! π€
Thank you so much, Filarance.I truly appreciate your kind words my friend.πππ
Absolutely my dear friend..!π
Awesome poem, Grace! Everything in life needs it’s counterpart and opposite to really be appreciated and respected.
Absolutely. Thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback.π
You’re most welcome. <3
Very very meaningful poem with a smooth flow of words & a magical effect!I loved it so much π
I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so very much Dhirendra.β€οΈ
A beautiful thought! Well done, Graceπ
Thank you so much, KK.β€οΈ
Beautiful lines
Glad you liked it. Thank you.β€οΈ
That ending works so well. You’re right about it, too, I think. Everything needs to help of something else.
Absolutely.Thanks so much for your thoughtful feedback , Benjamin.πππ
Welcome!!!! π
Beautiful poemβ€οΈ
So happy you liked it. Thank you.π
“one can hardly exist without help from the other!” I love that line.
Great piece Grace!
So happy you liked it, Dera! Thanks so much for the sweet comment.I truly appreciate it.β€οΈ