Assured

Approval is given,
with just a quick look,
invisibly measured ,
like reading a book.
An accepting true smile,
glistens in the eyes,
a swift wink or a nod,
destiny decides.

Approval is given,
when hearts do not seek,
acceptance conveying ,
what words can not speak.
Preferential treatment ,
to those without care,
a pretty demeanor,
will keep people there.

What is in it for me?,
most frequently asked.
A bright heart that is pure,
but mind fully masked.
Fears always keep looming,
while dancing inside,
exposing all terrors,
that try hard to hide.

Approval most given,
is rarely needed,
try to please them all,
often defeated.
The others are captured,
engulfed in their thoughts,
display a concrete shell,
hoping it is bought.

Approval once given,
is thrown in the trash,
grab what is offered,
then off in a dash.
Forgiveness for it all,
perceived approval,
crossing over self doubts,
ego removal.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Moonwashed Weekly Challenge December 27, 2023
Prompt – Crossing Over

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  1. Oh wow! Great wisdom beautifully expressed Grace!

    ***Approval is given,
    when hearts do not seek,
    acceptance conveying ,
    what words can not speak.***
    Perfectly stated and so true!!

  2. Grace, your poem delves into the intricacies of approval, capturing the subtleties in just a few lines. The imagery of glances, smiles, and nods paints a vivid picture of acceptance. The contrast between a pretty demeanor and a masked mind adds depth, exploring the complexities of genuine connection… Wow.

    ~David

  3. “try to please them all, often defeated” I certainly can feel this, Grace! I still struggle with trying to do this at times. 💞💞💞

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