I beg myself to make a mark,
my shadowed fears play in the dark.
I know that I could light the spark,
but hesitance builds whispered barks.
Clumsy vigor loses its pace,
running quickly while still in place.
Pray for the slightest touch of grace,
so I do not fall on my face.
Ease the tension off my shoulders,
standing tall, while feeling bolder.
My inner strength slowly smolders,
steering fate as the beholder.
Every new step carries great force,
a serene peace flows through each course.
Focus my view like a racehorse,
creating moves, guided by source.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
I especially love the second paragraph. Sometimes it is hard to combine action with grace.
Iām happy you liked it. Thanks so much.š
Ease the tension off my shoulders,
standing tall, while feeling bolder.
My inner strength slowly smolders,
steering fate as the beholder.
This brings to mind an image of a phoenix to me, wonderful piece, I really enjoyed the journey which you shared.
Iām so happy to hear that, Lauren. Thank you so much, my friend.š
Most welcome, dear Grace. š <3
What a lovely poem to read on this beautiful evening. You always make me smile, Grace. Beautiful poem. ā¤ļøā¤ļø
Thatās so wonderful to hear.Now Iām smiling too. Thanks my friend.š
Thatās wonderful. š Youāre welcome, Grace. Always. š
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This one was a masterpiece!! Loved it so much. The words and rhyming was so good!ā¤
Iām glad you liked it. Thanks so very much.š
The pleasure is mine! You are welcome ā¤
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Such a beautiful piece, Grace! Your poems are always so heartwarming and inspirational. This has all my heart ā¤ā¤
Iām so happy to hear that you enjoyed it, AB. Thanks so very much.š
Always a pleasure ā¤ļø
Wonderful. ā„ļø
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This piece is absolutely amazing and so very empowering! You are always brightening peopleās days with inspiration and beauty! That 3rd stanza especially resonates, but this whole piece is miraculous in many ways. Another gem, my dear friend š¤š«š¤
Thanks so very much, my dear friend .I truly appreciate you.ššš
Quite amazing poem:So very heartwarming one,Grace !š
Thanks so very much, Dhirendra.Glad you liked it.
My inner strength slowly smolders.. resonates with me. You have packed both power and beauty in this poem. Great work, Graceššš
Thanks so very much, KKš
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– āMy inner strength slowly smolders,
steering fate as the beholder.ā
– ācreating moves, guided by source.ā
– Beautiful words. All of it. But if I had to choose two lines, I choose the above. So precious is what you are. Thank
I appreciate your kindness, dear Selma. Thank you so much.š
Beautifully crafted!!!
Thanks so much. Shreya.ā¤ļø