Enter a place of unknowns,
unknown spaces create growth,
growth can form a sacred zone,
zones that embrace sincere oaths.
Oaths that whisper in my ears,
ears that listen as they clear,
clear blurred eyes of pent up tears,
tears release to chase off fears.
Fears are swept and thrown away,
away begins here today,
today allows thoughts to sway,
sway till life becomes okay.
Okay to replenish soul,
soul that still retains control,
control can obtain all goals,
goals once gained still leave a hole.
Holes are hungry to be filled,
filled by a great need to build,
build a dream so joy is drilled,
drilled until the heart feels thrilled.
Thrilled to elevate plateaus,
plateaus made to foreshadow,
foreshadow where spirits flow,
flow until inner lights glow.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
What a notably good piece with an outstanding rhythm. The repetition of the last words at the beginning of each sentence makes it a great read. I read it loud and enjoyed. Blends well with the theme of Arrival. ❤
I am so happy you liked it, my friend. Thank you so much for your kind response , dear Lamittan. It truly means a lot to me.💕
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Thank you, Grace.
Joanna
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This is pure genius! 🔥
Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.💕
I actually loved it.
Even better 🤣 Thanks again.💕
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Reading this piece was soothing. I really needed that right now. Thank you so much, Grace!
Thanks so much. Happy you liked it.💕
I sure did. ^_^
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Excellent writing 👏👏👏
So glad you liked it. Thank you.💕
It’s a pleasure to read you. 🤗
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Oh my, I just love the way this poem is written and it’s beauty. Thank you, dear grace for a masterpiece 😊❤️
So happy you enjoyed it, Simone. Thanks so much.💕
Wonderful reflections and words to live by Grace! 💖💖🙏
Thanks so much, dear Cindy.💕
You’re so welcome Grace and thank you!!! 💖
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You’re most welcome Always Grace! 💖💖
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Glow of a summer morning
Morning turns into evening
Evening sings a lullaby
Lullaby for a peaceful night 😊
This is so truly inspiring. Thank you for every piece of your heart you honor us with 🌸
Thanks so much.💕
I love what you did here❤️a true alchemist
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Exceptional! Beautiful construction and rhythm
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Grace you are awesome the flow and your light does shine it’s higher than you know… I I’ve been really down and really sick 🤢.. but I fall into the poems or darts of hope faith spiritual awareness.. your msg… Pulls me back up it’s strong… And spiritual…. Love your work grace
It’s always a pleasure reading your poems. There is a certain rhythm to them that makes them appealing.
Flow and form are superb, as are the messages in this beautiful poem, Grace. I love it much. 💞
So nice to hear, dear Jeff. Happy you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
Such a truly beautiful poem, dear Grace. Enjoyed and loved it very much❤
So happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.💕
i wonder how can someone became so much consistent about his work….. loved your posts😊😊😊 thanks to entertain us
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Wow, is so brilliant, Grace! The sequence of meanings packed in each line and stanza is excellent and I loved the flow of the rhymes and the repetition of the last words. And I especially loved these two lines-
“build a dream so joy is drilled,
drilled until the heart feels thrilled.”
This is so nice to hear, Shruthi. Thank you so much. I am so happy you liked it.💕
You’re welcome, Grace!
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Love this poem and it’s rhyming form Grace.
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, Sadje.💕
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Lovely. I like the way the last word becomes the first one on the next line.
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
Wow! So lovely lines in a chain of thoughts flowing until inner lights glow. A brilliant piece, Grace 😊💖
Thanks so much, KK. I am always so happy to hear you enjoyed .💕🙏💕
Yes, Grace, really enjoyed. So very welcome 😊
Indeed, unknown spaces create growth.
Very deep. Another beautiful poem.
Thanks so much, Benjamin.💕
You are welcome, my dear.
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Yes – so good 💞
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That is quite intricate.
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interesting poetic form; works well.
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Love this💕
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Aah! This is so beautiful in the choice and use of words. Keep em’ flowing! 😊
Glad you enjoyed . Thanks so much.💕
Most welcome 😊
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Graceful 🙂
Thank you.💕
This poem was marvelous Grace, I loved the nature and all it’s forms you used to create such a beautiful piece with your words.
So beautiful words and rhythm 👏🏻
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Welcome 🌻😊
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Amazing! I love how you used the 1st word and last word of each line that way
Happy you liked it. Thanks so much .💕