Twist and turn,
stab and burn,
fiery words,
fly like birds.
Aim to hurt,
no alert,
hand out pain,
ego gain.
Sympathize,
empathize,
guilty cry,
slowly sigh.
Shed a tear,
release fear,
flutter high,
say goodbye.
Say hello,
feel a flow,
happy leap,
with one sweep.
Soft and swift,
float and lift,
warmest light,
gives insight.
Feel so clear,
joy appears,
pure embrace,
filled with grace.
Peaceful bath,
happy path,
shines the way,
everyday.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
I love the rhythm of the poem, well done.
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
I agree with the above post–this has such a strong, vibrant flow to it. It’s energetic and powerful and, as always, brimming with wisdom. 🙂
Thanks so much, Mike. I am so very glad you enjoyed it.💕
It’s like all that negative emotion was put through a distillery and peace persevered. Digging the structure and rhythm on this one; to be fair, you’re really good at structuring your poetry ⭐️
Truly appreciate your kind words, O.D. Thanks so much.💕
This is so lovely, Grace. Beautiful flow, wonderful rhyme and stunning message. 💖💖
Thanks a bunch, my friend.Truly appreciate your kind support.💕
Welcome bunches, my dear friend. Always my pleasure. 💖💖
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I liked the rhythm of this poem very much! This was so positive and refreshing to read. Loved it!!💕
Im so happy you loved it, Jan. Thank you so much.💕
Both rhyme and rhythm flow smoothly in this poem. Well crafted piece, Grace👌💐💖
So nice to hear. Thanks so much.💕
Always welcome 😊💖
So powerful and a building crescendo to the end turned to beauty as always Grace! 💖💖💖
So glad you enjoyed, my friend. Thanks so much.💕
magical thanks 💖💖
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This one has a different energy to it and I love that. Loved the rhythm and the way you play with words ❤❤
Thanks so much, AB. 💕
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Powerful combination, words to understand what’s living and not. Be of good cheer. ❣️♥️
Thanks a bunch. Good cheer to you too.💕
Thanks 💝💞