When life is done, if visions last,
I will hold good times from my past.
Fond memories hold gifts of smiles,
with yellow flurried leaves for miles.
Pathways transform into slides,
brightly colored magical rides.
Possessions owned are left behind,
for hard work one only earns pride.
Lessons learned transform to stars,
light up the sky then erase scars.
Ugly times instantly buried,
warm sunny rays chase off worries.
Until that day, I will live well,
creating tales others can tell.
Close both my eyes, relive glories,
open them to write new stories.
Revised insight is evergreen,
my heart absorbs this gorgeous scene.
Notice how well I match my view,
fall to then rise, fully renewed.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for FFFC # 188, hosted by Fandango
Brilliant i love this poem. Your work like always is great.
I have to relearn how to write poetry.
I will take you as inspiration.
Thank you for the poetry lessons.
You’re so sweet. Thank you so much 💕
Absolutely brilliant.
Deeply introspective piece. I especially enjoy the depth of your words…
“Revised insight is evergreen”
So nice to hear, Suzette. Thank you so very much, my friend.💕
My pleasure 💐
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Beautifully expressed Grace.
Happy you enjoyed it, dear Sadje. Thank you 💕
You’re welcome
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Lovely!❤️
Thanks a bunch, dear Aaysid 💕
Beautiful ✨
Thanks so much 💕
Stunning!
Thank you so much 💕😊💕
another one deserving an applause. this was magnificent. i love how your poetry is so friendly to my mental diet. thank you so much, dear friend.
So happy you enjoyed, Audrine. Truly appreciate your kind support, my friend.💕
always a pleasure as it always is. 😊❤️😄
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Beautifully composed verse! 🌞
Thank you so much 💕
Beautifully expressed, dear Grace. I love it. 💞
Happy you enjoyed it, Jeff. Thank you 💕🙏💕
You’re most welcome, Grace. Always. 💞🙏💞
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Your stories will always sustain us dear Grace. Love the bright yellow beaming bright! ☀️
Thank you so much, Cindy. So happy you enjoyed it.💕
Your work is a highlight of my day. I always do my friend! Welcome❣️
Your so sweet. That’s so nice to hear. Thank you, dear Cindy.💕
It’s a nice poem about experiencing the afterlife I believe.
Thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed it.💕
What a beautiful poem, dear Grace! ♥️ You write so wonderfully. Love this! 🍁✨😊
So happy you liked it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Excellent way you place your phrases in each line. You create a graceful (no pun intended) arrangement of images that propel the reader to each new thought. Nice.
Im so happy you liked it. Thanks so much 💕
As always Grace your poems is 👌💯 love it! love! ❤❤❤❤
Thanks so much. Truly appreciate your kind support 💕
You are welcome Grace 💕
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Such a lovely and melodious piece, Grace.
Thanks so much, Eugenia. So happy you enjoyed it.💕
So beautiful!
Thanks so much💕
Wow, this piece is truly ethereal. Nicely done, my friend.
Thanks so much, dear Joyce. Happy you enjoyed.💕🙏💕
I sure did! Your work is always an awesome reading experience, Grace!
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Beautifully expressed!
Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful
Thanks so much 💕
Nice piece 😊
Thanks so much 💕
Love the flow of your writing, Grace! What you’ve described sounds like heaven 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn. That’s so nice to hear.💕