You cover my mouth
I lower my eyes,
You fit with the crowd,
I hopelessly sigh.
I swallow so hard,
and walk very light.
You mingle off guard,
with nothing to hide.
You strut ever free,
a full better half.
My best friend is me,
I am all I have.
To know me better,
is my concrete plan.
Instant forgetter,
erased as you ran.
I take a deep breath
then slowly exhale,
A mouthful of depth,
takes life for a sail.
My head held up tall,
smile placed on my face,
I conquer it all,
with feet still in place.
The last deed to do,
clear traces of you.
Create better views,
so my dreams come true.
Undervalued pawn,
a role I once played.
Bright as early dawn,
great values displayed.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published July 14, 2021
My poem “Value” was published at The Writers Club. I would like to thank their team for showcasing this piece.π
Beautiful
Thanks so muchπ
Nice flow.
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My soul sang with this one, Grace. So lovely. ππΌ
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.π
Congratulations, Grace. Beautiful work as always, and well deserving of being published at The Writer’s Club. π
Thanks so much, Mike.πππ
Congratulations on your publication of this piece. Much much deserved. Bravo π
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“My best friend is me.” … Honestly, Grace, sometimes we find ourselves in the crowd, yet lonely we feel. But, it’s okay, we get to know ourselves betterβsomehow.
I couldnβt agree more. Thanks so much.πππ
Wonderful piece Grace.
Thank you so much.π
My pleasure Grace.
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Clever. Loved this one.
Happy you enjoyed, dear K. Thanks so much.π
You’re very welcome.
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Your poems are always great, you are one of the most talented poets on WordPress. You have a way with words. Keep it up and have a nice day.
Thank you so very much. So glad to hear that you are enjoying my poems. Truly appreciate your kind support.πππ
Beautifully written Grace. Congratulations on publication
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How beautiful, Grace! Mazal tov!
~David
Thank you so much, David.π
Beautifully written πcongratulations Grace β¨
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“To know me better is my concrete plan”…a lifelong struggle for so many of us! Well penned, Grace! πππ
It sure is. Thanks so much, Dawnπ
Lovely writing! Many congrats to you, Sunshine! πΉ π π
Thanks a bunch, dear Nancy.π
Congratulations, dear Grace! You truly deserve for such an outstanding poem! Cheers πππ
Thanks so much, my friend.πππ
Most welcome Grace π
My pleasure π
Beautifully written Grace!
Thanks so much, Belladonna π
Congratulations, Grace, and well-deserved!π
Thank you so much, Eugenia.π
You’re welcome, Grace.
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wow. the i esp love the last stanza, Grace. felt like redemption.
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Amazing super
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I love this message of self-worth! It’s a great reminder we have value β€
Happy you enjoyed. Absolutely. Thanks so much π