So funny to see
all judgments that hide,
through false honesty,
expressed in the eyes.
Living the same tale.
playing unique roles,
Both male and female,
mirror every soul.
Some aggressively,
others peacefully,
Some destructively,
others gracefully.
Each being is sketched,
to follow routines,
then molded perfect,
to feed the machine.
Playing in a scheme
designed for a fall,
holding a clear dream
as blessings for all.
Held expectations,
no limitations.
Great aspirations,
create sensations.
Thoughts swim in the mind,
hopes live in each hand.
assist and define,
try to understand.
A plot with great twists
lead lifetimes we live,
learning to exist
and ways to forgive.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
A profound piece….dear Grace, I hope you’re considering publishing a poetry book ❤️
Thanks so much, Navin. I may consider publishing a book at some point. I truly appreciate your encouragement .💕❤️💕
You’re welcome, Grace…have a lovely evening 💫❤️✨
Have a great one as well.💕❤️💕
Thank you ✨❤️💫
What a beautiful piece dear Grace. so lovely!~💖
Thanks so much, my friend.💕
Welcome Grace💖
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Wow, Grace, this is one of my fav’s thus far. These lines here are so powerful,
“Each being is sketched,
to follow routines,
then molded perfect,
to feed the machine.” And, the ending is sublime. Masterful work, my dear friend. 💖💖💖
Im thrilled that you liked it, my friend. Thank you so much.I truly appreciate you .💕
I loved it much. 💖 You’re welcome, Grace. Always. Thank you, my friend, as I appreciate you. 💖💖
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I love the next to last stanza. The open hand reached out is such a powerful image. Inspired. 💜 Thanks, Grace.
I am so happy you enjoyed it, K. Thanks so very much.💕❤️💕
Nicely written! 💘
Thanks so much.💕
Mirror every soul
How deep your words are!👌👌👌💐💐❤️❤️
Thank you so much.💕
Wow! I am surprised at how deep every line is in this poem. Everything is so heartfelt. This are my favourite line:
A plot with great twists
lead lifetimes we live,
learning to exist
and ways to forgive.
Really a great and heartwarming poem!!❤❤❤
I am so happy to hear that. Thanks so much, Jan.💕❤️💕
“Both male and female,
Mirror every soul”
“then molded perfect,
to feed the machine”
These lines were amazing! So deep and well thought over. The ending, as usual, is your masterstroke! Loved this, Grace! Keep spreading the love ❤
Thanks so much, AB. Your comments always put a smile on my face.I appreciate you.💕
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Amazingg!!💫
Thanks so much.💕
Wow, I love me this poem❣️ It’s gorgeous!
I’m so happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
I always love how your poems are a mixture of clever rhyme scheme and profound wisdom. Wonderful piece!
Thanks so very much, Sam.💕❤️💕
Profound and a thought provoking poem, right from the first to last stanza. Well done, Grace👌👌💖
Thanks so much, KK.💕
Welcome, my friend 😊
Wow great piece, so insightful and very well written. Made me stop for a moment and self reflect. None the less great job as usual, have a blessed day.
Thank you so much, Gary.I truly appreciate your kind words.💕❤️💕
Your so very welcome,
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