Gallop like a prancer,
thirsty for a change,
search for a sound answer,
to this twisted game.
Listen to soft whispers,
carried by the breeze,
chant clear words of wisdom,
directed at me.
Old resentments fly free,
all lessons are prized,
Tired, lonely, sad tree,
thrilled from this surprise.
Fallen tears left behind,
as thunder and rain.
Greater stories will find,
adventures and gain.
No longer exhausted,
hydrated at last.
Happily supported,
all voids fill up fast.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written in response to Crimson Creative Challenge # 214, hosted by Crispina Kemp
A restorative feel to your beautiful poetry Grace. Love all your verse.
These resonated:
“Fallen tears left behind,
as thunder and rain.”
“No longer exhausted,
hydrated at last.
– marvelous!!
I am so glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much, Suzette. Truly appreciate you.💕🙏💕
Always a pleasure 💖
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As the sun breaks through the clouds
and the flowers start to bloom,
I am renewed and recharged,
ready to face the room.
With hope in my heart and a spring in my step,
I dance through life with grace and pep.
No longer weighed down by the past,
I embrace the present and look forward to the future at last.
So let’s gallop like prancers,
thrilled by the thrill of the chase.
With open hearts and open minds,
we’ll find our way to a better place.
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Beautiful, soothing poem.
Thanks so much, Sadje.💕
You’re most welcome
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That first verse is so insanely awesome, you captured me immediately. I love the flow and the beauty throughout!!!! Another masterpiece, dear Grace 🤍🤍
So happy you enjoyed it, Grace. Thank you so very much, my friend.💕
Soothing words and images. I especially like the second stanza (“soft whispers / carried by the breeze…”). Such a pleasant thought. Lovely stuff, my friend! 🙂
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕🙏💕
Such a beautifully written poem. I love it so much. Please
Thanks so much 💕
Nice photo
And poem
Thanks so much 💕
Welcome
Another positive perfect poem, Grace, keep on writing.
Thank you so much 💕
One more inspiring poem that gives such a soothing effect. Loved it, Grace 💖💐🌹
Happy to hear that, KK. Thank you 💕
It’s truly my pleasure 💖
Love the pace of this poem, and the word choices. So pleased you’ve contributed again 🙂
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much. My pleasure.💕
🙂 🙂 🙂
love this cycle of nature replenishing itself in your beautiful poem Grace!❣️
So glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much.💕
loved! 💞
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Your poetry always inspires. Lovely write, Grace. 💞
Thanks so much, my friend.💕🙏💕
You’re most welcome. 💞🙏💞
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Powerful lines…amazing flow…another beautiful piece, my friend ✨💟💫
Thank you so much, dear Navin.💕
You’re welcome, dear Grace ✨💟💫
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perfect for this Sunday morning, thank you, Grace.
Happy to hear that. Thank you 💕
most welcome, dear friend. 😊❤️😄
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Nature has so many of the answers…but I want to wrap the sad tree up in a hug! 💞 Beautifully done, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn.💕🙏💕
You always leave me enchanted with your poems and sentiments. Thank you very much for that, my friend Grace.
So glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Many thanks.💕
Beautiful poem
Thanks so much.💕
Loved this poem, Grace💕👍🙂
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much 💕