Sit by the lake, to get a break,
thoughts do not shake, hopes re awake.
Trees look so bare, feel the brisk air,
release my cares, wish all was fair.
Life made up new, built just by you,
intentions true, with open views.
Kiss filled with grace, placed on your face.
floats high in space, love is embraced.
All goals are reached, learn to then teach,
acceptance speech, no need to preach.
Live and let live release then give,
do not relive, instead forgive.
Expect the best, pass every test,
obtain each quest, greet days with zest.
Fulfill your soul, make yourself whole,
by letting go, obtain control.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written in response to Crimson Creative Challenge # 218, hosted by Crispina Kemp
“All goals are reached, learn to then teach,
acceptance speech, no need to preach.
Live and let live release then give,
do not relive, instead forgive.”
LOVE THIS!
Happy to hear that, my friend. Thanks a bunch. 💕
Masterpiece! 🤗
Thank you so much 💕
Beautiful! You completely brought us there with you!
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much 💕
Grace, I love this poem.
Thanks so much, Nicole. So happy you enjoyed it, my friend.💕
Beautiful poetry Grace. You presented soul healing wisdom here. Thank you!
Thank you so much, Suzette. Truly appreciate it. Hope you are having a wonderful weekend, my friend.💕
Yes, thank you Grace. And may your weekend be blessed and full of joy!
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Such a beautiful poem Grace! In the end it’s really ourselves we need to forgive and not hold grudges! ❣️💗❣️
Thanks so much, Cindy. That is so true. Very wise, my dear friend.💕🙏💕
You’re so welcome Grace! Life teaches us as we grow and wake up everyday! Thanks dearest💗
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The rhyming in this is just pure poetic greatness!!! What a beautiful piece, dear Grace! One can always feel the love flowing through every line of your poems 🤍🤍
Thanks so much, dear Grace. So happy to hear that. Means a lot to me.💕
Nice flow! I enjoyed this.
Thank you so much💕
You are welcome
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A beautiful take Grace
Thank you so much💕
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You are the champion of rhyming. I enjoyed reading it.
So kind of you. Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful advice for life, Grace! Masterfully done 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn.💕
A nice take, Grace! Such an inspiring poem with brilliant rhyme and rhythm 👌💐💖
Thank you so much, dear KK💕
Pleasure is all mine 💖
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Such a beautiful poem, dear Grace…amazing message ✨💟💫
Happy you enjoyed it, Navin. Thank you so much.💕
You’re welcome, dear Grace 💫💟✨
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love every bit of this, dear friend.
do not relive, instead forgive- that hit me. thank you 😊❤️
Happy it resonated, Audrine . Thank you so much 💕😊💕
Well written!
Thanks so much 💕
This has such a great rhythm. It has everything I love. Brilliant!
Thank you so much, Crispina. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Indeed yes. Give me more!!! 😊 😊 😊
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