Balance a bit more each year,
lessons gained, help adjust life.
Happiness conquers cold fears,
so true joy could replace strife.
Balance a bit more each year,,
tight connections feel kinder.
Enjoy times presently here.
kill envy, fasten blinders.
Good and bad will come and go,
perceptions always decide.
Sweet and salty waters flow,
life first takes, to then provide.
Balance a bit more each year,
sorrows felt, make thoughts so strong.
Hardened hearts soon disappear,
as kind acts linger along.
Balance a bit more each year,
foreseen steps can be measured.
Greater paths open quite clear,
a bright future endeavored.
Droplets fall fast from the sky,
over waves upon the sea,
hold time as years pass on by,
some so sweet, others salty.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 189 June 05, 2023

I love this. Truth be told it is awakening.
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Always so much wisdom in your words Graceπ
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Wonderful. Loved it.π¦οΈ
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Very nice! I so appreciate your way with words!
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A wonderful read! Well penned Grace!
Thanks a bunch, Suzette. Happy you enjoyed it.π
Always a delight, my friend.
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I love this Idea. Anita
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Sweet and salty waters flow,
life first takes, to then provide…
a beautiful thought and lovely words to end… π€β¨π
Thank you so much, Destiny π
Life right there in two words ‘sweet & salty’ π
Absolutely, Angela. Thank you π
I love the salty and sweet essence of this poem Grace! β£οΈ
Happy to hear that, Cindy. Thank you π
Beautifully crafted poem Grace! So much wisdom here my friend. Thanks for joining in.
Truly my pleasure, dear Sadje π
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With every grain of salt
we remember life’s sweet gains
Beautifully expressed, Ivor. Thank you π
My pleasure Grace
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Beautiful poem!
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To seek balance in life is to know how to live well.
I love your lyrics, my friend Grace… π€ππ€
Thank you so much, dear Lincoln π
Balance is the key to success in life. Well portrayed, Grace ππ
Thank you so much, dear KKπ
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that was real talk
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Beautifully done, love the flow and message of this piece! It fits the prompt so very well πππ
Thank you so much, Dawn. Happy you enjoyed it.π