Counting down the hours
till you say goodbye.
Like a withered flower,
feeling cold and dry.
Sweet thoughts become sour,
good memories die.
Visions hold such powers
deep within sad eyes.
Tears transform to showers,
clearing clouds inside.
Pride stands like a tower,
weaknesses all hide.
Counting down the seconds
until you arrive.
Thanking deep connection
that our hearts survived.
Angels up in heaven
help intentions thrive,
giving us direction
so that love can drive.
Absorbing affection
that light beams provide.
Pieces of perfection,
forever alive.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Thank you, Grace, for the beautiful poem!
Joanna
Thank you , Joanna. So glad you enjoyed.💕
You are welcome!
Joanna
Oh such a beautiful poem Grace of so much love and so many memories. Parting is sweet sorrow and surrenders Grace! 💖💖
Thank you, my friend. I am so glad you enjoyed it.💕
It was my pleasure!!❤️
Wow what a beautiful poem. It touched me. “Visions hold such powers deep within sad eyes” my favorite line. Great rhymes too ❤️
I am so happy you liked it. Thank you so much.💕
Gorgeous poetry, dear Grace. Loved every line. 💕
Beautiful poem with rhyme, dear Grace!❤️
Thank you so much, Jane. Happy you liked it.💕
You are welcome dear.❣️
Yes, forever alive. What an elevating poem, dear Grace. Every sentence just raises the heart.
Im so happy you liked it. Thank you so much, dear Lamittan.💕
Sure I did. Such a wonderful piece! You’re most welcome, dear 🤗 💕
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Parting is not always sad. So nicely presented, Grace 💖💐
Thank you, KK.So glad you liked it.💕
Pleasure is mine 😊
Pieces of perfection forever alive.. that hits deep!!
Beautiful piece and rhythm, Grace❤❤
Loved it!🎀
Happy to hear that, Aayushi. Thank you.💕
I think this metaphor is especially effectively selected and composed:
Like a withered flower,
feeling cold and dry.
Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful
Thanks so much.💕
So Beautiful💕
Thanks so much.💕
So smooth, and both heart-wrenching and heart-warming. Beautiful in every sense, Grace. 🙂
So happy you liked it. Thanks so much, Mike.💕
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Georgous poetry dear.
Thanks so much, Anita.💕
I’m new here and got your posts first….. Amazing one!! ✨️🎀
Welcome. Thanks so much.💕