Your eyes shout loud, with silent words,
making all logic seem absurd,
your clear message I have now heard.
fluttering by, like a sweet bird.
Your eyes wear hidden, unseen smiles,
a mesmerizing, aloof style.
Lost hopes and thoughts create a pile,
I analyze you for a while.
Your eyes both carry a still dance,
guiding me swiftly into a trance,
forcing my will to take a chance,
I slip and fall hitting romance.
Your eyes then make me feel at ease,
their light and wisdom turn my key,
angel wings unfold, expand free,
feathery dance within the breeze.
Your eyes give me my full control,
help me escape out of this mold,
feeling complete, finally whole,
soft lullabies play from our soul.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published on April 24, 2021
Wow! Brilliant imagery, every line! Great writing Grace!!!
Thank you so much, Suzette. Happy Saturday , my friend .💕
Thank you! Happy Saturday Grace. Peace.
Thanks so much, Laiba.💕
They eyes have it! So much to see here…beautifully done, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thanks so much, Dawn.💕
That last stanza is just golden!! Amazing piece, thank you for re-sharing with us. Spectacular writing as always 🤍🤗
Happy you enjoyed it, dear Grace. Thank you so much .💕🙏💕
You need a stanza of mom eyes, where you know you are in trouble when you get in the car. LOL. Loved it.
Good one. That would be great. Thank you so much.💕
Your poetry goes from strength to strength. This is special.
So nice to hear. Thank you so much.💕
Amazing poem, Grace. Thanks for sharing it.
Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.💕
A little romantic but fantastic!
I have read the power of eyes for the first time!
You deserve praise by Eyes!
So kind of you. Thank you so much.💕
Excellent poet Grace
Thank you so much, dear Sadje.💕
You’re most welcome
Wowzers – this is good, Grace! <3
Thank you so much, David. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
that was such a joy to the heart, dear friend. thank you for sharing this piece.
Glad you enjoyed it, Audrine. Thanks so much, my friend.💕
Excellent piece on eyes, with touching words and amazing imagery. Good one, Grace 👌💖
Thanks so much, dear KK💕
My pleasure 💖
This is really beautiful, Grace!😍❤️
Thanks so much, Aaysid. Glad you liked it.💕
It’s always a pleasure.😊
What beautiful imagery and such a gift to have someone to see you Grace! So moving and touching! ❣️
Thanks a bunch. So true. Glad you enjoyed.💕🙏💕
You’re so welcome dear! 💞
You’re so welcome Dear Grace!! ❣️
Thanks so much.💕
The flow 🔥
Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful words ❤
Thanks so much 💕