Twinkle, sprinkle, shimmer bright,
light up dark skies through the night,
blow stardust upon my dreams,
touch my conscience till it gleams.
Twinkle, sprinkle, shimmer bright,
have your essence erase fights.
Let your presence heal all wars,
penetrate love through all cores.
Twinkle, sprinkle, shimmer bright,
cure warped minds so thoughts fly right.
Fill all hearts until they shine,
so every soul feels divine.
Twinkle, sprinkle, shimmer bright,
grant the future, paths of light,
allow empathy to grow,
so pure kindness overflows.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
This is brilliant Grace
Thats so nice to hear, Sadje. Thank you.๐
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Thankyou , Grace.
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.๐
Such a delightful format. The repetition of the first line sets up each stanza so well and gives it a sort of lyrical feel. I can imagine humming along with this one–it’s musical. Very cool, Grace. ๐
Glad you liked it, Mike. Many thanks, my friend.๐
very nice
Thanks so much.๐
This is just what i needed today ๐
So happy to hear that. Thank you.๐
Love this ๐
So happy you enjoyed it. Thanks.๐
sensitive, powerful, lyrical …. brings me joy.. thank you and best wishes, Lyrix ๐
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.๐
Beautiful flow, rhythm, and rhyme, dear Grace. Itโs amazing. ๐
Thanks so much, dear Jeff. I am so happy you liked it.๐
Youโre welcome, dear Grace. Always. I loved it, my friend. ๐
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Amazing!! Very touching. Thanks for sharing. ๐
So happy you liked it. Thank you ๐
You are welcome. ๐
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Very Nice!
Thank you.๐
Lovely!
Thank you๐
This spikes up hope. I love the internal rhyme in the first sentences. ๐
Happy to hear that, Lamittan. Thank you.๐
Indeed. Feel most welcome ๐
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what a bright beautiful twinkling poem lighting up the sky and our world. I hope they hear your wishes.. I do Grace! ๐๐๐
So happy you liked it, my friend. Thanks a bunch, Cindy.๐
Wow! Such a beautiful, energetic poem with smooth flow! Great one๐๐
Thank you so much, KK. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend.๐
It’s my pleasure, Grace ๐
What an awesome presentation you have created.
So glad you liked it. Thanks so much.๐
Well written Grace โจโจ
Thanks so much, Kirti.๐
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Beautiful twinkles in the night, with wishes for a future that is bright.
Glad you liked it.๐
I sure did. ^_^
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Great post๐
Thanks so much.๐
Welcomeโค
This is ao beautiful
Thanks so much.๐
Love this!
Thanks so much.๐
Agreed that’s a very fine poem.. the images it put in my head was good ๐
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.๐
The eye you seek is in the sun… God bless
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Such a great poem!
Thanks so much.๐