In need of a break,
from all his past crimes.
Made many mistakes,
then served his full time.
Swallows inner fears,
gives life a new try,
hopes no one could hear,
deeply hidden cries.
Another door slams,
in front of his face,
obstructing all plans,
slowing down his pace.
His head in his hands,
broken and disgraced,
tries hard to withstand,
scars meant to be traced.
Arms up in the air,
forgive and forget.
Knows life is not fair,
heart beats with regret.
Attempts at repair,
by paying his debts,
suspicious eyes stare,
see him as a threat.
He gathers his will,
and strength to believe,
climbing steeper hills,
for those he made grieve.
Forgives his own spills,
sensing great relief.
Finds lights that fulfill,
goals he will achieve.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
A gorgeous piece, Grace. The way you write about inner transformation is always so elegant and heartwarming. I love this. ❤️
Thank you so much, dear friend. I am so glad to hear that enjoyed it and really appreciate your kindness and support.💕🙏💕
You’re most welcome, dear Grace. Always my pleasure. I loved it, my friend. 💖🙏💖
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A skilfully good write, dear Grace. Change and optimism carefully and thoroughly explored. I enjoyed reading this. 🌟❤🌟
This is so nice to hear, Lamittan. Thank you so much, my friend .💕
You’re most welcome, Grace dear. 💖
such a powerful hopeful piece of forgiveness Grace. We have to start with ourselves my friend everyday! love it!
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I’m so happy you loved it, my friend. Thank you so very much.💕
You’re so welcome!!!❤️
Such powerful and important sentiments. Forgiveness and second chances can be difficult for both parties, and sometimes forgiving ourselves can be next to impossible. So many horrible biases and prejudices are aimed at keeping people down and “in their place.” We need to eliminate those biases and learn to see each person on an individual level, and be wiling to give forgiveness and help when needed. We’re all in this together and we all need each other. Your words are deeply moving, Grace. 🙂
I absolutely agree, Mike. Thank you so much for your heartfelt words, my friend .💕
Lovely narrative. The last verse is magical omg. A very powerful piece😍❤
So glad you liked it, Suvi. Thank you.💕
You’re most welcome🥰
A wonderfully written piece, Grace! I loved the optimistic end.
Thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed it.💕
You’re welcome!
Another door opens, when one is closed. An inspiring poem one again, Grace 😊💖
Absolutely . Thank you, dear KK.💕
Most welcome, Grace 💖
A vividly imagined poem with powerful heartfelt verses. Wonderfully written!!❤
Thank you so much.So glad you enjoyed 💕
Such powerful piece…amazing, deep & flowic verses…beautifully written, dear Grace ✨❤️💫
So happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much.💕
You’re welcome my friend ✨💟💫
And the goals he will achieve ☸️
Absolutely . Thank you.💕
Such a powerful and deeply moving message, Grace. Well done. 💕
Happy you liked it, Sara. Thanks so much.💕
My pleasure! 😊