blocks of regrets,
circling with threat.
tough to forget,
in the mind’s net.
A misty hue
till they are dead.
that lay ahead,
so that they spread.
and yellow light,
so dreams transform
into plain sight.
Calming all storms
making wrongs right,
so joys can form
and twinkle bright.
Rejoice and fly,
let hopes float high,
touch the blue sky
exhale a sigh.
Closing both eyes
seeing the signs,
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Thanks so much, my friend.💕🙏💕
“Closing both eyes
seeing the signs…”
I like how this implies finding truth and peace within ourselves once we close our eyes to the distractions of the outside world. Truly words worth pondering (with eyes closed!). 🙂
I find sensory deprivation to be excellent for uncovering deep thoughts. Thanks for commenting my friend.💕
The experience is best without the sense. They distort 😊
I absolutely agree. Thanks so much.💕
I so enjoy breathing in your lovely words, with such wonderful imagery, and feelings in the evening, dear Grace. This is a beautiful poem. ❤️❤️❤️
Thanks so much! I’m so touched and happy to hear this,Jeff. It truly means a lot. Grateful for you, friend.💕
I’m so happy this is so. ❤️ You’re always welcome, Grace. Is my great pleasure. Thank you, my friend, grateful for you too. ❤️🥰
Beautiful scenario in poetry cutting to the chase.. Nice Grace! 💖
So nice to hear you enjoyed, my friend. Thanks so much.💕
You’re so welcome Dearest!! 💖
Beautiful words with amazing imagery and rhyming, as always. Loved reading it, Grace 😊💐💖
Happy to hear that, my friend. Thank you.💕❤️💕
You’re more than welcome 😊💖
I liked the visceral quality if these poem. Really evocative. Beautiful.
So glad you liked it. Thank you so much.💕
Oh my, beautiful & profound lines…absolutely rhythmic rhyme…you made my eyes to shine…when I dived deep in the imagery, dear Grace ✨❤️💫
So happy you enjoyed, my friend. That’s wonderful to hear. Thanks so very much, Navin.💕
I very much enjoyed it…you’re welcome, Grace ✨❤️💫
I saw the path, am glad I saw this my friend 💞♥️💞
Thanks so much.💕❤️💕