Releasing Thoughts

Fermenting thoughts
blocks of regrets,
threatening force
circling with threat.
Forgiveness course
tough to forget,
memories caught
in the mind’s net.

A misty hue
sprinkles ahead,
attacking blues
till they are dead.
Attracting views
that lay ahead,
repeating truths
so that they spread.

Absorbing warmth
and yellow light,
so dreams transform
into plain sight.
Calming all storms
making wrongs right,
so joys can form
and twinkle bright.

Rejoice and fly,
let hopes float high,
touch the blue sky
exhale a sigh.
Closing both eyes
seeing the signs,
visions comply
wishes hereby.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

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  1. “Closing both eyes
    seeing the signs…”

    I like how this implies finding truth and peace within ourselves once we close our eyes to the distractions of the outside world. Truly words worth pondering (with eyes closed!). πŸ™‚

  2. I so enjoy breathing in your lovely words, with such wonderful imagery, and feelings in the evening, dear Grace. This is a beautiful poem. ❀️❀️❀️

      1. I’m so happy this is so. ❀️ You’re always welcome, Grace. Is my great pleasure. Thank you, my friend, grateful for you too. ❀️πŸ₯°

  3. Beautiful words with amazing imagery and rhyming, as always. Loved reading it, Grace πŸ˜ŠπŸ’πŸ’–

  4. Oh my, beautiful & profound lines…absolutely rhythmic rhyme…you made my eyes to shine…when I dived deep in the imagery, dear Grace βœ¨β€οΈπŸ’«

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