Feeling so numb,
a little dumb,
never succumb,
my day will come.
Drew diagrams,
oh what a sham,
life flew off plan,
fears grew and ran.
Dreams became real,
for thieves to steal,
wore off my heels,
hope made me kneel.
Faith called a guide,
that lived inside,
love could not hide,
doubts drowned by pride.
Finally whole,
regained control,
the brightest soul,
rules my new mold.
This world then changed,
no longer strange,
thoughts rearranged,
Happiness gained.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Another masterpiece from Grace.
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Congratulations
Thanks so much, my friend .π
“hope made me kneel.”
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Thank you, Grace!
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.π
Profound lines…so uplifting & filled with love β¨ππ«
Thanks so much, dear Navin.π
You’re welcome, dear Grace β¨ππ«
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Lovely words and the last line is amazingβ€
Thanks so much, Laiba.π
Welcome Graceβ€
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Another beautifully constructed poem with a positive message. You are great, Grace. Thanks for sharing!
So kind of you. Thanks so much.π
Lovely and inspiring, dear Grace. Such beauty in your words. π
Thank you, Jeff. Glad you liked it.π
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Beautiful lines yes if we want to change the world we have to change our thoughts to get happiness. Thanks for sharing ππ
Absolutely, Priti. Thanks so much.π
It’s my pleasure stay blessed β£οΈπ
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Faith is the one solid foundation that keeps us grounded
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Light always finds a way. It feels good when it finds you. π
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I feel your words βΊοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈ
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Such gentle power and beauty in this inspirational poem. Nice rhyme and rhythm. Good one, Grace πππ
Thank you so much, KK.π
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beautiful uplifting rhyming poem Grace. I love it! π
So glad you enjoyed it, Cindy. Thanks so much.π
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“…life flew off plan…” Oh boy, I really feel this line. Still, your poem is hopeful, as they always are, and maybe that’s enough. Nicely written, Grace. π
Thanks so much, Mike.π
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What a beautiful poem
Thanks so much.π