Just needs a break, for her past crimes,
heartfelt mistakes, have served their time.
Dark inner fears, prevent new tries,
no one could hear, loud hidden cries.
Open doors slam, before her face,
obstruct all plans, slow down swift pace.
Head in her hands, torn and disgraced,
tries to withstand, all hopes defaced.
Arms in the air, prays to forget,
life is not fair, swallows regret.
Searches for signs, to pay off debts,
fate soon aligns, to release threats.
Gathers free will, strength to believe,
climbs steeper hills, to heal held grief.
Bright lights fulfill, heartbeat perceives,
forgives past spills, instant relief.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 211 November 06 , 2023
A beautiful take Grace. Climbing up from a low is difficult, takes lot of effort and will. But well worth the effort. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you so much, my dear friend. It sure is. My pleasure.💕
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I echo what Sadje said here Grace ❤️
Thanks so much.💕
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Oh woww!!
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<3 !! Sad to hear any doors slam in the face of someone with pain.
I agree. Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful poem expressing the journey of overcoming past mistakes and finding inner strength. It’s a reminder that even in difficult times, there’s hope for a brighter future. Awesome as always dear Grace ❤
Glad you liked it, my friend. Thank you so very much. Truly appreciate, dear Suma💕
Just ~ excellent!
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David
Thank you so much, David.💕🙏💕
Such a beautiful poem, dear Grace…you’ve grace in your ink as well ✨❤️💫
So sweet of you , Navin. Thanks so much 💕
You’re very welcome, dear friend ✨💜💫
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I feel her pain but not about crimes.LOL
sometimes a girl just needs a break and a glass of wine.
Yesss. Absolutely. Thanks so much, Belladonna 💕🥰💕
You’re welcome!
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Such a beautiful take Gracev💕
Strong and empowering 👌👌
Love it 🤗
Glad you liked it,Maggie. Thanks so much 💕
Well penned Grace. An inspiring piece…courage takes time.
Thanks so much. It sure does.💕
What a lovely reflection and poem on this prompt Grace. Talk about overcoming obstacles. 🥰💞😎
Thanks a bunch, dear Kym. Absolutely 💕
Oh Grace, you are so very welcome. My pleasure as always! 🥰💞😘
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Just lovely Grace i have missed your lovely creations ❤️
So nice to hear. Thanks so much 💕
Sometimes it is easier to learn from past mistakes and correct them personally; However, there are mistakes that society buries for life and these people often return to the same thing. It’s all a dilemma.
A pleasure to read you, friend Grace.
Absolutely, Lincoln. Well put, my friend. Thanks so much for sharing. Hugs.💕
Wow ! Last line is my fav ❤️
Thank you so much 💕
Beautiful take on the prompt, Grace. I love your last line “forgives past spills, instant relief”, which is how we grow and improve ourselves.💖
Thank you so much, Eugi. Happy you enjoyed it. Absolutely 💕
My pleasure, Grace.
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A beautiful reflection, Grace! Inspiring, as always 👍💖
Thank you so much, my friend 💕
Always a pleasure 💖
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Great poem with such encouragement, Grace💕
Thank you so much , Cindy. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Wonderful poetry ❤️
Thanks so much 💕
Appreciate your poem including “Gathers free will, strength to believe, climbs steeper hills, to heal held grief. Bright lights fulfill, heartbeat perceives, forgives past spills, instant relief.”
Thanks so much. Happy you enjoyed it. 💕🙏💕
Hard work to overcome the past, especially as others won’t let you forget it. Beautifully written, Grace! 💞💞💞
Absolutely. Thanks so much, Dawn 💕