Life transcends,
time echoes, bells ring.
One life ends,
another begins.
One life ends,
another begins.
Souls descend,
within a new skin.
Perfect blend,
connecting all limbs.
One life ends,
another begins.
One life ends,
another begins.
Faith ascends,
preparing to win.
Acts amend,
absolving stale sins.
One life ends,
another begins.
One life ends,
another begins.
Light extends,
so circles can spin.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Thank you Grace.
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.π
I love the repetition…so powerful…your poem is echoing in me…& the tuning fork is resonating π«
I canβt express to you how wonderful it is to read this. Thank you so much, my dear friend.π
You’re very welcome, dear friend…
Ah, the cycle of life and love. You’ve put it so elegantly.
Thanks so very much.πππ
Beautiful
Thank you.π
You are very welcome π€ and thank you, I felt this in my soul and that is not an exaggeration
That is so nice to hear, thanks again.πππ
Beautiful lines, yes one life ends another begins ! Well shared thanks πππ
So glad you liked it. Thank you so much.ππ
It’s my pleasure ππstay blessed πππβ€
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Gorgeous form and flow, Grace. Is beautiful. π
Thank you so much, my friend.ππ
Yes, life’s a circle my dear Grace. I love the repetition in this poem. π
So glad you enjoyed, dear Lamittan. Thanks so much.ππ
The pleasure is mine β€
This is really really amazing! Loved itππ«
I am so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.ππ
For every end, there is a new beginning. The cycle goes on. Depicted so well, Grace πππ
So glad you liked it, KK. Thanks so much.π
Pleasure is mine π
This is what life is all about Grace!
I like the rythm of your poem . β€
Happy to hear that, Marie. Thank you.π
powerful, insightful truths shared Grace. this was brilliant!~ π
Thanks a lot, Cindy. Happy you you enjoyed it, my friend .π
The message is hopeful; the format is amazing. The repetition is mesmerizing and adds so much immersion to the poem. Beautiful work as always, Grace! π
So happy you enjoyed, dear Mike. Truly appreciate your kind words of support.π
“Faith ascends, preparing to win.” Gorgeous writing Grace, love itπ
So happy you enjoyed . Thank you so much .ππ
I sure did, you’re always welcomeπ₯°
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Your poems, and especially this one, are often breathtaking. What a talent. Thank you.
What a beautiful compliment . Thanks so much. I truly appreciate it.π