Cut the strings,
feel the sting,
sadness pings,
accept dings.
Heart breaks fling,
pop smoke rings,
stories sing,
till tales wring.
Fly and swing,
unfold wings,
let life bring,
happy things.
Lights will bling,
jump and spring,
grasp the sling,
love will cling.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Love the rhythm and rhymeβ¦your poem sings, Grace. π
I’m so happy you enjoyed it, KT. Thank you so muchπ
I agree with KT. Rhythm and rhyme awesomeness, Grace. I love it. π
So happy you loved it, my friend. Thank you πππ
Youβre most welcome, Grace. Always. πππ
Oh sure, the love will cling with such inspiring verses. Well done, Graceππ
Thanks so much, KK.π
My pleasure π
Simply amazing, lifting. I love the rhythm. ππππ
Happy to hear that, my friend . Thanks.πππ
Welcome, Grace. ππππ
beautiful words to cling to Grace… thanks my friend~! π
Thanks a bunch.So happy you liked it.
of corse! awesome and happy to always!π
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Not only is this a super-cool poem, the structure is amazing. It’s not easy to find and utilize sixteen of the same rhyming words and end up with something that makes sense, but you do it so well. You’re so fun to read, Grace! π
I am thrilled to hear this make. Thank you so much. You truly made my day.π
Loved the rhyme, in hereβ€β€
Beautifully crafted, Grace!
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.π