He rides the rails through farmland dusk,
his coat smells faint, leather and musk.
by the window, hands folded tight,
the train wheels hum through fading light.
A photo slips within his coat,
sweet baby girl, a frilly note:
“Grandpa, I’ll see you soon,” it read,
as guilt stirred deep, regrets soon led.
Strong women that he left behind,
silence sharper than words unkind.
The wife who waited, eyes gone gray,
while he chased dreams that slipped away.
He folds it gently, eyes grown wet,
there’s too much now he can’t forget.
Kind hearts he held so soft and true,
he offered storms they never knew.
A mother once with calloused hands,
who held him up like iron stands.
He never cared to treat her right.
just left one day, slipped into night.
Beautiful wife, carried his name,
then bore far more and took the blame.
He broke her trust in quiet ways,
too blind to notice hollow days.
His daughter, too, with guarded grace,
a stranger’s strength behind her face.
He missed recitals and her tears.
neglected her for all those years.
But here he is, with trembling palms,
in worn out shoes, still acting calm.
He carries with him more than weight,
he hopes and prays he’s not too late.
Yet right on time for one small soul,
a girl who might help hearts feel whole,
he’ll kneel when first he sees her there,
gray cap of hair helps hide his care.
And whisper soft, a small prayer,
“I’m better now, fully aware.”
“Little one, I will learn anew,
how to love, and be good to you.”
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Powerful reminiscence of the heart felt emotions of a man in regret. Love it! Keep inspiring. 🤗
Happy you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
Outstanding writing and memoir, Grace. You captured well the sense of longing. Brava!
Thanks so much, Suzette. So glad you liked it. Have a great day.💕
You are most welcome, Grace!
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Grace this poem encapsulates a whole lifetime of neglect and regret
Thanks so much, Sadje. 💕🥰💕
You’re welcome ☺️
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An emotional and thoughtful poem, Grace.
Thank you so much, Mary💕
Such a powerful reminiscence, great imagery 🙌
Thanks so very much.💕
Wonderful and deeply moving. A poem full of humanity, remorse and light. A story of mistakes, but also of hope. A humble hymn to the possibility of starting over, even if the heart already carries too many winters.
I wish you a day full of light, joy and many, many blessings. 🌞💫
Thank you so much, my friend. Your thoughtful words are truly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.💕
Heartfelt lines, Grace! Beautifully penned!👏👏🌹
Thanks so much, KK.💕
My pleasure, Grace 💞💞
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My pleasure, Grace 💕💕
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So beutifully heartfelt Grace 💕💕
Thanks so much, Maggie.💕🥰💕
Always my pleasure Grace 💕🤗💕
Beautifully written, my friend! Love this. 🌺💗
Thanks so much. 💕
Such a raw and deep poem where angst and upset truly hurt. I love the shift of the turn around at the end to coming around before it was too late! Lovely Grace!
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I’m so glad you liked it, Cindy. Truly means a lot to me. Have a wonderful day, my friend. 💕
a touching and heartfelt share, Grace …🤍
Thanks so much, Destiny 💕
my pleasure…🤍
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Beautiful capture of one who regrets neglect of loved ones, Grace. Brava!
Thanks so much, Eugi. 💕
Most welcome, Grace!
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Such a heartfelt and heartbreaking tale, Grace! So beautifully written 💞💞💞
Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Thanks so much, Dawn. 💕
I love the story and positive outcome of your poetry Grace 🤗. Having a second chance should be available to all. Sometimes we are too tight in our own drama that we don’t know how to end it. And then a chance arises and we ought to take its hand and walk a new road.
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Well put, Marie. I absolutely agree. Thanks so much for sharing your wise thoughts, my friend. Have a wonderful day.💕
Heartfelt!
Thanks, Warren 💕
You’re welcome!
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I’ve just stumbled upon one of your posts which really spoke to me, so I googled the author which led me back to your page, to see THIS POST ❤️ It’s extremely rare that I come across someone’s thoughts that resonate so deeply with my lived experience; written in such a way that feels like you’ve entered my mind and scripted thoughts together that I, myself, have not been able to put into words. This is beautiful, raw, devastating, and so true.
Wow. It feels amazing to know that this piece resonated with you and touched you. Thank you so much, truly means the world to me. So motivating. Truly appreciated.💕