Surrounded by a darkened hue,
talk without reason or a clue,
your uttered words are hardly true,
raw chaos feels at home with you.
Erratic tones possess your voice,
portray a victim without choice,
killing the peace with your loud noise,
envying those with natural poise.
Wishing me bad, I wished you good,
you never knew I understood,
I tried to help, did what I could,
your mind was a block of dense wood.
So sad to see what you became,
a grown-up with no ounce of shame,
no one is left to play your games,
now only mirrors can be blamed.
I truly wish you change your ways,
sincerely hope you are okay,
so hurt inside, for you I pray,
that the sun melts despair away.
This life you live is what you choose,
the future may bring better shoes,
but if you choose to cause abuse,
you will soon find, that you will lose.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Wow Grace!!!! This is AMAZING!!! The rhyming and the flow is utterly sublime – the whole piece is sublime!!! I am so inspired as a poet…you are a magnificent writer!!! Keep shining, dear friend 🖤🤗
That is so sweet of you Ace. Thank you so much for your kind words and continuous support.I truly appreciate you my friend.❤️
Aww of course!! I appreciate YOU 🖤🤗
Thank you so much Mina.❤️
Most welcome Grace
Your blogs are very special to me
That’s very sweet of you to say. Thank you.❤️
You deserve to be followed Grace
Your poetry leaves a an angst so beautiful.
Thank you penhive. Happy you enjoyed.❤️
I have read several of your poems, and made the following assessment.your rhyming, your timing.
The flow is just exceptional
What a beautiful compliment. Thank you so very much,Charmaine.💕🙏💕