Burn,
old cuts,
traumas flee.
Turn,
what shuts,
into keys.
Churn,
all “buts”,
goals fly free.
Earn,
ease guts,
let it be.
Yearn,
dreams strut,
truths eyes see.
Learn
to putt,
endlessly .
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 233 April 08 , 2024
Marvelous instropection, Grace. Love the idea that “goals fly free”
Thanks a bunch, Suzette 💕
You are very welcome Grace! Cheers.
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beautiful piece Grace!
Thanks so much, Gabriela 💕
My pleasure hon 🙏❤️
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This has such a unique look and feel, a sort of staccato flow that works perfectly. Your wordsmithing talents are on full display here, Grace! 😊
Thanks so much, my friend . Glad you enjoyed 💕🙏💕
I like the way you structured syllabic count. It works well, I think.💭
Thanks so much, Melissa. Glad you enjoyed.💕
I love the ebb and flow of this poem Grace. Beautifully executed! 😍💖🥰
Thanks a bunch, my friend 💕
Oh my dear Grace, you are so very welcome as always my friend. My pleasure! 🙏🏼😍💖🥰🥂
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This poem is so uniquely you Grace 🤗
Love iit 💕
So sweet of you, Maggie. Thank you 💕
My pleasurevdear Grace 💕💕
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A beautiful, well written poem Grace. The short sentences create a lovely rhythm in Your poem. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you so much, my friend. Truly my pleasure 💕
It’s always my pleasure
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Oh, I like this, Grace. A great take!
Thanks so much, Nancy 💕
Most welcome!
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Wonderfully creative, Grace! ✨
Thanks so much, Michele 💕
Exquisite reading of your verses.
Hugs, Grace. 🤗🪴
Thanks so much, my friend. Hugs💕🤗💕
Love your thoughts, Grace, but what impressed me is your perfect rhyming scheme. Well done 👌💐💖
Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Thanks so much 💕
You’re welcome 💕
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Masterfully done, Grace! Love the “turn what shuts into keys” especially….what a fabulous visual! 💞💞💞
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much.💕
love your words strung so beautifully Grace. A great put any day on the green💓
Thanks so much, My friend . Glad you enjoyed. 💕