Thick stormy clouds control my mind.
The world I see feels so unkind.
Vile ugly acts spread great sorrows,
cracked concrete paths build tomorrow.
Tornadoes swirl my ringing ears,
sweeping my mind, releasing tears,
my heart and pulse quickly increase,
try to obtain some inner- peace.
Rain showers pour upon my head,
I wonder if kindness is dead.
Salted wounds hurt and make me scream,
wishing unjust was just a dream.
Bright rainbow views amaze my eyes,
I feel new hope inside arise.
Faithful wishes are now defined,
hope social change someday aligns.
Sun rays and lights dry off my tears,
warms up my heart, providing cheer.
Blue skies become brighter and clear,
people can grow, progress each year.
My inner thoughts project outside,
I grasp the universe inside.
Pure love can turn wrongs into rights
if everyone tries to unite.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Beautifully said it is always from inside out. Someone becomes the change they wish to see and projects it in the universe.
Absolutely!Thanks so much,Gayatri.💕
Is this a collaboration
Nope, just me.💕
Beautiful Grace your words very well expressed those thoughts.💕🌼
Thanks so much, my friend. I truly appreciate your kind words and support.❤️
Just amazing, my dear friend!! I absolutely love this piece and the empowering ending…you are the queen of epic endings!! There is such a powerful message here that I feel deeply in my soul, brilliantly done! Keep shining, Grace 🖤🤗
I am so happy to hear this, Ace. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I so appreciate your kindness and your beautiful support, my friend.💕
beautiful-beautiful…
how amazing you projected your inner-thoughts🙌✨
what a magical conclusion when you murmured, —
«pure love can turn wrongs into rights
if everyone tries to unite»😍
thanks, Grace, as always🌼💛🤗
Thanks so much, Coco. Your comments truly warm my heart.💕
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So uplifting! I love the way you work with sound and rhyme in this gorgeous poem 🤗
So glad you liked. Thank you so much.💕
This one really resonated with me, so lovely xxx
Thanks so much.💕
Gorgeously written, as always, dear Grace. A beautiful poem, my friend. Love it. ❤️❤️
So happy you liked it, Jeff. Thanks so much.💕
I did, indeed. Always my pleasure, my friend. ❤️
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I love how it turned from a scene of despair to one filled with hope. Beautifully written, Grace ❤️
Glad you liked it., Shweta. Thanks so much.💕
You’re very welcome ☺️
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The transition from negativity to positivity is beautiful!
Thanks,Vignesh.Glad you liked it.💕
Welcome 🙂
Woww..! Querida gracia, me encanta, me encanta mucho. Todas y cada una de las líneas son muy positivas. Eres un motivador increíble. Todas las líneas son poderosas y fuertes. Excelente escribe querida. ¡Mucho amor para ti mi querido amigo ..!💕💕🤗
Muchísimas gracias, querida amiga. Te lo agradezco.💕
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I grasp the universe inside.. so true, as this poem has done. Inspiring one. Very well written👌👌💐
Thanks so much, KK.I truly appreciate your kind and thoughtful words.💕
It’s my pleasure 😊
And Unite we all must do! Beautiful expression Grace!
I’m so happy you liked it , Marsha. Thank you.💕
Wonderful words and what an ending! Beautiful as always! 🥰💫🙏❤️✨
So nice to hear. Thanks a bunch, Diana.❤️
Wow. Beautifully said. Love the rhyming. Good job Grace! Dee
Truly appreciate it. Thanks 💕
I love the juxtaposition you created between the darkness and the light of a “storm,” whether it be interpreted metaphorically or literally. Very well done!
Thank you so much.So glad to hear you enjoyed it.💕