Crawled so slow, yet happened fast,
ever present, endless past,
same place in another time,
wide dimensions, mirrors chime.
Dull echoes sing soft lyrics,
aimlessly defy physics.
Light and dark dance into gray,
whisper lessons as they play.
Fears appear to transfix most,
entities peacefully coast.
Shadowed visions bring a scare,
to those that walk unaware.
Eyes believe that they see ghosts,
energies are pleased to host,
watch from a higher plateau,
feel stares from so long ago.
Mysteries unravel quick,
knowledge makes the air flow thick,
beings in a different space,
intertwine and interlace.
Snap back to reality,
analyse mortality.
Enthralled by this piece of art,
with no end and no known start.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for FFFC #213 hosted by Fandango

a powerful poem, Grace.
and the last is epic. 🤍🙏
Happy you enjoyed it, Destiny. Thank you 💕
you welcome 🤍
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A true reflection of the image! Said it all 🤗
Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed it 💕
Your writing is always beautiful, but this:
Crawled so slow, yet happened fast,
ever present, endless past,
same place in another time,
wide dimensions, mirrors chime.
This gave me chills. Beautiful piece.
That’s so nice to hear, Nicole. Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕
Well done Grace. You captured the essence of the what is real.
So glad you enjoyed it, Suzette. Thank you so much.💕
Always a pleasure.
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Nice👏👏
Thank you 💕
A great interpretation of the image. Well done!
Thanks so much 💕
Wow! Poetry that actually rhymes 🙂
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Great poem 😊
Thanks so much 💕
You’re welcome 😊
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Very powerful!I love this!!!!
Thank you so much.💕
Beautiful soothing piece, dear Grace. What stunning words. Truly well done, my friend 🤍🤗
Thank you so much, Grace. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Good take in this surreal image.
Thank you so much,my friend 💕
You’re welcome
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Fantastic ending Grace 🙌
Thanks so much 💕
Well said, Grace, a nice take! The ending is superb👌💖
Thank you so much, KK.💕
It’s my pleasure 💖
I love the mood you established with the language. Very elegant and lyrical.
Thank you so much 💕
Haunting piece in those in between spaces…nicely said, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thank you so much 💕
Beautifully written Grace 🙌
Thanks so much💕
Such a wonderful flow and love embracing all sides and moving through in such beauty and wisdom in your amazing piece Grace❣️
Glad you liked it, Cindy. Thanks so much.💕
A pleasure always! 💗
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Beautifully expressed Grace….
Thank you so much 💕