Impactful Crash

When ocean waves,
speak with the breeze,
words sing so brave,
dance flows with ease.

Salt water slips,
on floors of sand,
the deepest dip,
forces command.

Stone anchorage,
offers great views.
Peaceful courage,
magical hues.

Surf full of love,
slides, to then crash.
Creates a cove,
laughs with a splash.

All day and night,
an endless show,
sways to sun light,
as the wind blows.

Beautiful times,
blanket the shore.
Always sublime,
forever more.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What do you see #164 December 12, 2022

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  1. This piece brings such peace and tranquility to the heart and soul! Reading your amazing words is like stepping into a vortex of calm beauty. Love love love this, dear Grace 🀍

  2. This is velvety-smooth, Grace, and the imagery is intoxicating. All that’s missing is a lighthouse! πŸ˜€ Seriously, this is right up my alley as my love for the ocean knows no bounds. What a perfect poem! πŸ™‚

  3. I just wanted to take a moment to compliment you on your writing skills. Your poem about the ocean is truly beautiful and evocative. The language you used was vivid and the rhyme scheme added to the overall flow of the poem. It was clear that you have a deep appreciation for the beauty of the ocean, and you were able to capture that in your writing. Your talent for crafting such a lovely piece of writing is truly impressive, and I admire your ability to express your thoughts and feelings through the written word. Well done!

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