that goes untold,
without a word
screams go unheard,
fall to the ground.
Old souls spinning,
great fate repeats,
this time winning
all past defeats,
opened hands give
a love so pure,
divine love lives,
as stillness sweeps,
a massive chime,
touches so deep,
whisked way past space
to then plant down,
upon a maze,
on flowered grounds.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published on January 7, 2021
For some reason, I thought I heard a gentle music box tune playing while reading this piece. It was gracefully done.
How sweet. Thank you so much.💕🙏💕
Certainly. It was much appreciated.
Really cool poem! Like a xylophone
Thanks so much.💕
You are a gifted poet
So sweet of you. Thank you so much.💕
Beautiful imagery Grace .. 💕🌏
Thank you so much, Ivor.💕🙏💕
You’re welcome Grace
Love the lyrical mood to this poem, Grace. Well penned piece.
Thanks so much, dear Suzette. I am so happy you enjoyed it.💕🙏💕
My pleasure 😊
It’s a lovely poem, Grace. The form and imagery are great. It seems to be a poem about redemption. A least so it feels to me. Great work, and thanks for sharing. Have a nice day!
Thank you so much. Absolutely. So glad you enjoyed it.💕
This last stanza Grace is so moving .. I love your poem!! 💖
So happy you enjoyed it, my friend . Thank you.💕
All of your work makes my day always! 💖
So happy to hear that, my friend. Thank you so much.💕
It’s a pleasure!! 💖💖
Thanks so much, Sadje.💕
You’re very welcome
Grace always has a creative way of expressing her thoughts subtly and succinctly.
So nice to hear. Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful and lyrical.
Thanks so much, Eugenia.💕
A gorgeous poem, Grace, so moving and inspiring. Well penned 👍💐💖
Happy you liked it, my friend. Thank you.💕
You’re welcome 💖
You’re poems are truly a gift to the world. I love and enjoy them very much. This one is magical and fascinating💞💞
So sweet of you, my friend. Thank you so very much. That’s so nice to hear.💕
Admirable post. Lovely words and the picture too is awesome❤
Happy you liked it, Laiba. Thank you.💕