He wakes up exhausted,
feels the same while in bed,
his world is distorted,
numbness laced with pure dread.
All moves feel so stagnant,
within his encaged thoughts,
dull memory fragments,
haunt false tales he once bought.
Disguising sorrowed tears,
wears a slight broken smile,
his attempts carry fears,
often seen as hostile.
Raindrops produce music,
that cascade on his head,
gifts of hopes that may stick,
to eventually spread.
Deeply stares at the sky,
till a rainbow appears,
aspirations run high,
as his dusty mind clears.
An empowering choice,
help him gain some control,
finding ways to rejoice,
swiftly brightens his soul.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published November 06, 2021

A very hopeful poem!
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Love the optimism of this poem.
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Love it. Thank you for sharing.
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I can totally relate to this piece. Outstanding. Truly.
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Nice
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Beautiful and so positive and optimistic Grace. Thanks for sharing. 😘💖🥰
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You are so very welcome Grace! 🥰💖😘
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Wonderful Grace 💟
Full of hope and inspiration 🙏
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My pleasure Grace 🤗always1💟
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Beautiful described emotions and marvelous imagery throughout…l love the imagery in:
**Raindrops produce music,
that cascade…** Brilliant!!
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Thank you! And a wonderful day to Grace!
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A blissful change from the dark to the light.
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Such a beautiful turn from challenges and insihgt so well penned dear Grace❣️
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Beautiful.
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So full of hope Grace, lovely 💕
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to rainbows and the hope they carry… as with the words you share… wonderful as always Grace 🙏
Thanks so much , Destiny.Glad you enjoyed, my friend.💕🙏💕
truly a pleasure 🤍
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Rainbow is truly aspirational. An inspiring poem, Grace 🌹💖
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Nicely expressed
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Lovely Grace. ❤️
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Love this Grace!
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I immediately wrote a piano melody in my head while reading this! Such inspiring words!
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Love this
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I love the melodic way you took him out of the depths of darkness and back into the light 💞
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What a poignant piece, Grace! Your words beautifully capture the journey from despair to hope, painting a vivid picture of resilience and inner strength. The imagery of raindrops and rainbows is especially striking, symbolizing the transformative power of optimism in the face of adversity. Thank you for sharing this touching poem.
Delighted to know you enjoyed it. Thank you so very much. Truly appreciated.💕
You are welcome. Thank you again for your post.