The front doorbell rings,
my heart skips and springs,
sixth sense leaps then flings,
pure excitement sings.
I open the door,
nothing to explore,
then look at the floor,
feel chills touch my core.
Found an envelope,
instructions to cope,
instantly felt hope,
extended my scope.
It taught me the way,
to brighten my days,
keep ego at bay,
so happiness stays.
Never knew from who,
this message came through,
it changed my old views,
made me feel brand new.
Flew in like a dove,
straight from up above,
gave a gentle shove,
filled me up with love.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for RXC PROMPT #243 hosted by Reena
Prompt – Situation 2
The doorbell rings and your character answers it – finding nothing but an envelope with nothing on it. They open it and follow the instructions.
Well done. Excellent take on the prompt, Grace. I felt the excitement!!
So glad you liked, Suzette. Thanks so much 💕
My pleasure 😊
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Superb
Thanks so much 💕
Where can I purchase a door bell that makes me feel like that ??? I want one…no two or three !
marc
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This is beautiful Dame.
Thanks so much 💕
Looks like a very pleasant surprise 😀
Absolutely 💕
Imagine recieving such love letters from someone everyday. Isn’t it lovely?. Beautiful words ❤
Thanks so much, dear Laiba . Glad you enjoyed it.💕
Welcome❤
Gorgeous words, Grace. 💞
Thanks so much, dear Jeff.💕
You’re most welcome, dear Grace. Always. 💞
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This poem is a masterpiece. Brilliant expressions. Wow. Impressive!
Thanks so much, Benjamin. So happy you enjoyed it.💕
Welcome, Grace.
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These words are beautiful. Receiving love letters like that must be a heavenly feeling.
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Very well handled Grace. Your letter is full of wonderful advice and wisdom
Thanks so much, Sadje. Happy you liked it.💕
You’re welcome ☺️
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And I just rang this doorbell through this post
It’s amazing
So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you 💕
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Sometimes those simple details change a life, you just have to be attentive to receive them.
I like your poetic feeling.
Hugs.
Absolutely. Thanks so much.💕
Love this 💞
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much 💕
An excellent take on the prompt, dear Grace. Love this!!👏🏻👏🏻
Happy you enjoyed it, Jan. Thank you.💕🙏💕
A nice take, Grace! Inspiring lines. Well done 👍💐💖
Thanks so much, dear KK.💕
Always welcome 😊
Superb take on the prompt, Grace!
So glad you liked it Eugenia. Thank you.💕
My pleasure.
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Oh this is. Wonderful
Uplifting take on the poem Grace!! No anthrax in this one …😂
Thanks so much, Cindy. Nope no anthrax. 💕🤣🤣🤣💕
Beautiful and wonderful rhymes! ❤️
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
Awwwwwww, thank you for passing along those healing words, Grace.
Glad you liked it, my friend. Many thanks to you.💕🙏💕
Thank you for sharing this awesome piece, Grace.
Glad you liked it. Thank you.💕
It was elegantly done. You are a master of wordsmithing.
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Beautiful Grace!
Thank you so much 💕
I always love the rhythm of your poetry, Grace 💜 Brilliant work 💜
Thanks so much. Truly means a lot to me.💕
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