My yard offers a comfort zone,
a serene place to call your own.
The endless journey you have flown,
brings you right back, but not alone.
I wake up to your egg filled nest,
feel a great joy deep in my chest.
Happy to see my cherished guest,
choose my home for safety and rest.
Leave for a feed though not for long,
hesitant but you must stay strong.
Your partner sits where you belong,
hear your return through whistled songs.
Two weeks swiftly pass by so fast,
your hatchlings form a multicast,
their distinct chirps make echoes last,
listening to them is a blast.
I see you teach fledglings to try,
you push them till they learn to fly.
Feel prideful tears reach both my eyes,
knowing it’s time to say good bye.
Look forward to this time next year,
your visits bring me so much cheer.
I will make sure your space is cleared,
perfectly set when you appear.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What do you see #148 August 22, 2022
Beautiful 🦋
Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful
Thanks so much.💕
Your welcome
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When i see your poems its like time stops. It does make me smile. I cant deny it i love great poetry.
A map that leads to,
The future poet in you.
But wait, its the current you.
Making you smile is a bonus.
I am a poor poet, you are a countess.
A smile as bright as a rainbow.
From one poet to another great work.
It seems i always got something to say. Its worth it because its great reading your poems.
Thanks so much, my friend.Glad you enjoyed it💕
Great 👌
Thanks so much.💕
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Beautiful Grace 💞 👌💯💞
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
This poem is sweet. Reading it brings a warm smile to my face. The picture of home and childhood comes to mind. Beautiful and interesting.
I’m so happy you liked it, Benjamin . Thanks a bunch, my friend .💕
You are welcome, Grace.
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Hey! the second paragraph “choose my home for safety and rest” soo true, I recon everyone should agree on this. No home is as comfort as your own home.
cheers!!!
Absolutely .Thanks so much.💕
Nicely penned. A wonderful job giving the poem dual meaning both as a mother and children. As well as enjoying returning birds raising their chicks. Thank you it brought a smile.
Thank you, Suzette. I am truly thrilled to hear it brought you a smile. You truly made my day.💕
My pleasure. And thank You, Grace.
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“I wake up to your egg filled nest,
feel a great joy deep in my chest.
Happy to see my cherished guest,
choose my home for safety and rest.”
Really enjoyed this Grace, very tender and uplifting! 😁👌👏❤️
Thanks so much.💕
Lovely poem, Grace.
I’ve had wrens build nests in my front door wreath and hanging flower pots. And robins nest in the rafters of my back porch.
Thanks so much. Sounds absolutely beautiful.💕
I love this, Grace! The storytelling powered by imagery and melody is gorgeous! Well done! 💜
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.💕
This brought about serious emotion. So beautiful Grace. Definitely made me think of my kiddos.
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
A gorgeous poem, Grace. I love it. 💞
Thanks so much, Jeff💕
That was heart warming. Love it, Grace ❤️❤️
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you.💕
It’s touching the heart. This is the most beautiful poem about nesting birds I’ll ever read in my life.
Thanks so much.💕
oh Grace I so relate to this and LOVE being part of nature and watching the birds nest and fledge. it’s always so sad to see them leave… jut like our “babies”. 💖💖 love it!
So true. Watching them leave is both heartbreaking and fascinating. Thanks so much, my friend .💕
It’s so true Grace. Always bittersweet!
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Aww, such a sweet story/poem. Thanks Grace for joining in with this lovely poem.
So glad you liked it, dear Sadje. Truly a pleasure 💕
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This was such a sweet and stunning piece, dear Grace! I truly enjoyed it so much. Fleeting emotions captured in beautiful poetry. Love it💕💕
I am so glad you enjoyed it , my friend . Thank you so much 💕
That’s a heartwarming poem Grace 🙂 Amazing how you manage to have each line in every stanza rhyme with each other! Brilliant writing 🙂
Thanks so much.💕
I feel love and emotion here. I had seen a pigeon laying eggs in my house and one day they left. Well penned, Grace 👍💖
Im so happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Truly enjoyed. It’s my pleasure 💖
Wonderful description of the illustrious companions that brighten up your yard and your life.
Greetings, Grace.
Thanks so much, my dear friend 💕
Awwwwwwwwwwwww.
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Brilliant❤
Thanks so much, Laiba💕
Welcome❤