Fourth degree burns by those she loved,
made all trust fade, feelings were gloved,
made all trust fly, linger above,
allowed great doubts to tug and shove.
She only trusts what can not lie,
the one who comforts silent cries,
the one who lives behind her eyes,
gives her hopes wings that help her fly.
She only trusts the thoughts she thinks,
follows her heart to dodge conflicts,
follows her soul so feelings link,
builds confidence up brick by brick.
She only trusts what lives inside,
only what her feelings provide,
only what her spirit supplies,
the notions minds can not disguise.
She only trusts herself and source,
the voice that whispers silent thoughts,
the voice that guides her through life’s course,
gifting her a grand inner force.
With time she healed and took a chance,
chose to give faith a longer glance,
chose to give hope some room to prance,
so that each day could be enhanced.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Iโm glad that with time she learned to trust again
So am I, Sadje. Thank you.๐
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I admire the courage of her faith to heal.. That faith is never wasted. A powerful testimony.
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She finds the courage to trust herself that takes a ton load of courage. This piece is beautiful ๐
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“Fourth degree burns by those she loved,
made all trust fade, feelings were gloved,”
Excellent opening lines Grace! ๐๐๐๐ I’m familiar with those burns.
Thanks so much. Glad you liked it. Those burns are excruciating but we come back stronger right? ๐
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Amazingly beautiful, dear Grace. ๐
Thanks so much, my friend ๐
Youโre most welcome, Grace. Always. ๐
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One of the finest I have read in a while. Very touching, well put.
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.๐
Beautiful poetry, Grace! The last lines are so wholesome.๐
Thanks so much. Happy you liked it, Aaysid.๐
It is always a pleasure, Grace.๐
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A beautiful tale of healing. Thank you for sharing this.
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.๐
I sure did. Thanks, as always, for the spirit boost.
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Love the positivity of the poem, well done, Grace. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks so much, my friend.๐
wow what a beautiful testimony of faith and healing Grace!
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this is simply beautiful. best to trust herself and her inner voice. i love the way she did it. this was perfect, Grace.
So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.๐
A relatable story hidden in the poem…Great and mesmerizing wordsโค
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Great poem, Grace and the title is fantastic! Nice work! ๐
Glad you liked it, dear Nancy. Thanks so much.๐
Beautifully written ๐
Thanks so much, my friend.๐
Outstanding first line! To trust oneself is the beginning of healing.
Thanks so much. I absolutely agree. ๐
My pleasure, Grace!
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This is one more amazing poem, Grace, on trusting the self. So uplifting ๐๐๐
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It’s really my pleasure ๐
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So much to love. Just excellent. Fortitude clap. ๐
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The loneliness of the damaged soul. I doubt that any have not known this to some degree.
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I’ve always loved how you end your poems, so uplifting. Another amazing piece โคโค
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Fantastic writing. Love your work.
So nice to hear. Thanks so much.๐
Sad and relatable. Beautifully written. ๐ฅฐ
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To have trust shattered is devastating. I’m glad the girl in this poem found her way to a better place. Your poetry always resonates, my friend. ๐
Thatโs so nice to hear. Thanks so much, dear Mike. Appreciate you, my friend.๐
Love this.
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Very well
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The picture is stunning and the words are lovely. Trust is soooo hard. I was just talking about that earlier today!
Thank you so much. It sure is.๐
You’re welcome! Glad I came across your blog today โบ๏ธ
Thatโs so nice to hear. Thank you. Will be checking yours out this evening.๐
Ohhh that’s so sweet of you! Looking forward to hearing your thoughts
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