Flock Together

Upon a hill, where grasses gleam,
a golden hawk sat in day dream.
Its neck turned sideways, eyes so wide,
watching the wind and world collide.

High above, on a slender tree,
small chaffinch chirped so cheerfully.
Rich orange neck and belly bright,
soft feathers brushed with brown and white.

“Good day,” the little bird did say,
“I see you watching far away.
You sit so still, so calm, so wise,
what do you see beyond the skies?”

The hawk soon spoke, thoughtful in tone,
“I think of how we birds have grown,
you’re small and swift, I’m strong and slow,
but still, we share the sky we know.”

Chaffinch tilted his tiny head,
“true, we are different,” then he said,
“But still we talk, and still we sing,
no need for hate or quarreling.”

“We don’t compete, we don’t demand,
we simply live and understand,”
The hawk replied with steady gaze,
“People can learn from simpler ways.”

And side by side, though far in size,
they watched the world with wiser eyes.
A hawk and chaffinch, calm and free,
can coexist in harmony.

As they both paused, one branch, one ground,
while quiet winds blew all around.
Two birds, two worlds, yet side by side,
great lesson whispered countryside.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 296 July 07, 2025

This weeks prompt offered two picture options. This poem was inspired by both pictures. 💕

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  1. Grace, this feels like a gentle fable wrapped in rhyme. I really appreciate the quiet wisdom in your closing lines—simple, tender, and true.

    Much love,
    David

  2. Beautiful and wise lesson in this lovely poem Grace. I wish we humans thought like this too. Thanks for joining in.

  3. Very captivating story, Grace! The gentle coexistence of two totally different birds in harmony. Thank you for this. 🙌🧡

  4. Beautiful poem that reminds us that true coexistence is born of acceptance and mutual respect, and that nature, in its simplicity, offers us silent examples of harmony that we rarely hear.

    I send you a warm hug from a distance, friend Grace.

  5. Outstanding! I love everything about your poem and the dialog of acceptance between the two birds, Grace.
    What a great example nature sets before us. Well.done.

  6. This is smashing. You took this prompt in a great direction. Love it. Now if us humans can be like these birds. Much wisdom in your closing.

    1. Thank you so very much, Dawn. Delighted to know that you enjoyed, my friend. We can absolutely learn a thing or two from nature. Have a wonderful day.💕

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