Upon a hill, where grasses gleam,
a golden hawk sat in day dream.
Its neck turned sideways, eyes so wide,
watching the wind and world collide.
High above, on a slender tree,
small chaffinch chirped so cheerfully.
Rich orange neck and belly bright,
soft feathers brushed with brown and white.
“Good day,” the little bird did say,
“I see you watching far away.
You sit so still, so calm, so wise,
what do you see beyond the skies?”
The hawk soon spoke, thoughtful in tone,
“I think of how we birds have grown,
you’re small and swift, I’m strong and slow,
but still, we share the sky we know.”
Chaffinch tilted his tiny head,
“true, we are different,” then he said,
“But still we talk, and still we sing,
no need for hate or quarreling.”
“We don’t compete, we don’t demand,
we simply live and understand,”
The hawk replied with steady gaze,
“People can learn from simpler ways.”
And side by side, though far in size,
they watched the world with wiser eyes.
A hawk and chaffinch, calm and free,
can coexist in harmony.
As they both paused, one branch, one ground,
while quiet winds blew all around.
Two birds, two worlds, yet side by side,
great lesson whispered countryside.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 296 July 07, 2025
This weeks prompt offered two picture options. This poem was inspired by both pictures. 💕

Love, love, love it! Thank you so much for sharing.
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
Grace, this feels like a gentle fable wrapped in rhyme. I really appreciate the quiet wisdom in your closing lines—simple, tender, and true.
Much love,
David
Thanks so much, David. So happy you enjoyed. Have a wonderful day.💕🥰💕
you too!
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I agree. 💯 Good comparison.
Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful and wise lesson in this lovely poem Grace. I wish we humans thought like this too. Thanks for joining in.
Thanks so much, my friend. I wish so too. My pleasure.💕
You’re most welcome Grace.
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Very captivating story, Grace! The gentle coexistence of two totally different birds in harmony. Thank you for this. 🙌🧡
So glad you liked it. Thank you so very much. Have a wonderful day.💕
What a beautiful poem Grace, and a lovely response to this picture prompt my friend. 😊👏🏼💖
Thanks so much, Kym. Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Have a fabulous day.💕
You are so very welcome Grace! Enjoy the rest of your amazing week! Smooches! 🥰💖😘
Thank you, my friend. Have a great one too. 💕🥰💕
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I like it.. kudos on sharing
Thanks so much 💕
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Beautifully written…and my hope too.
Thanks so much.💕🙏💕
As it should be dear Grace 🤎 thank you for sharing your inspiring words my friend.
So glad you liked it, Maggie. Thank you. Have a wonderful day.💕
Loved it Grace 💕
My pleasure.
Thank you dear friend, and you too 🤗
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Beautiful Grace, and I love the ending lines 💕
Thanks so very much. Happy you enjoyed. Have a great day.💕
Very nice, Grace.
Thanks so much, Mary.💕
Beautiful poem that reminds us that true coexistence is born of acceptance and mutual respect, and that nature, in its simplicity, offers us silent examples of harmony that we rarely hear.
I send you a warm hug from a distance, friend Grace.
Thanks so much, Lincoln. Delighted to know you enjoyed, my friend. Have a beautiful day.💕
Outstanding! I love everything about your poem and the dialog of acceptance between the two birds, Grace.
What a great example nature sets before us. Well.done.
Thanks a bunch, Suzette. So happy you liked it, my friend. Have a blessed day.💕
You are very welcome Grace. Blessings!
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A heartwarming message. Thank you, Grace. Nature does beautifully model how to coexist. 💕
Thanks so much. So happy you enjoyed. It absolutely does.💕
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This is smashing. You took this prompt in a great direction. Love it. Now if us humans can be like these birds. Much wisdom in your closing.
Thank you so very much, Dawn. Delighted to know that you enjoyed, my friend. We can absolutely learn a thing or two from nature. Have a wonderful day.💕
Lovely natural conversation between the fanciful finch and the elegant eagle. We would do well to learn from them and their easily flowing friendship. Wonderful! ♡♥︎♡
Thank you so much, Nancy. I absolutely agree that we can learn from these beautiful birds. Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Have a wonderful day.💕
beautifully done , Grace 🤍
Thanks so much, Destiny.💕
pleasure always 🤍
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What a lovely poem and message, Grace! I pray it takes wing and spreads across the land. 💞💞💞
Thanks so much for your beautiful response, my friend. Truly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.💕
Superb! I love the dialogue between the two birds, and the wise message in your finale. Brava! 💕
So happy you enjoyed it, Eugi. Thanks so much. Have a wonderful day.💕
You’re welcome, Grace, and you have a wonderful day as well. 💖
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Lovely poetry. Really enjoyed this. 😁
Happy you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
and humans are the smartest of animals? no not really.
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What a delightful story/poem of accepting each others difference’s, Grace! Beautifully written, my friend!
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Thanks so much, Cindy. Glad you liked it, my friend. Have a beautiful day.💕
You’re so welcome, Grace! Always! You too! 💗
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Lovely work, Grace. A powerful reminder to just be. 💗
Thanks a bunch. Happy you enjoyed.💕
What a lovely poetic story and message, Grace! Well penned 💞💞
Thank you so much, KK. Truly appreciated, my friend. Have a great day.💕
My pleasure, Grace💕💕
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