Feeling confused,
heart split in two,
one part outgrew,
dreams she thought true.
Another side
had too much pride,
ignored the lies
hidden inside.
The part that knew
what was untrue,
pushed to pursue
new goals and views.
The other one
became undone,
never begun
and never won.
Facing cold facts,
keeps life on track,
helps sway old acts,
so good attracts.
Open closed eyes,
feel inner vibes,
to recognize,
darkness from light.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Thank you, Grace.
Joanna
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Itβs such a treat to read you, Grace. This one touched my heart. Beautiful poetry, my friend. π
So sweet of you, Jeff. Thank you so much, my dear friend.
Youβre most welcome, Grace. Always. π
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Ahhh good old confusion… naturally the only hope of figuring anything is to write a poem… and for me too. Love it
Absolutely.π€£Thanks so much.π
Always a pleasure to read your posts. Why are we always hoping for the best when our heart tells us otherwise? Lovely poetry.
Thanks so much. So glad you enjoyed. π
To distinguish lightness from the dark one has to clear the mind. Lovely poem
Absolutely , Sadje. Thanks so much.π
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From dark 2 light,
I figured out which is right,
The path twords the light,
Will have my future bright!
Iβm inspired ππ―π
Thank You for the magic!
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Nice, one Adam. Thanks so much.π
Where the heart beats, love never sleeps …
Where Is Love?
Behind every word
There is a thought
Between every thought
There is an emotion
Underneath the emotion
There is a heartbeat
Below the heartbeat
There is a soul
Within the soul
There lives love
So beautiful, Ivor. Thanks for sharing. π
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This was such a meaning and mesmerising poem. Powerfully written. Really enjoyedβ€β€
So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.π
Amazing indeed. Reveals deep facts about a divided personality with divided interests, dreams and inspirations, one timid and another full of yearnings.
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you.π
Sure i did. Feel much welcome dear π
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Superbly evoked π
Thank you so very much.πππ
The dilemma continues. Beautifully written, Grace ππ
Thanks so much, my friend .π
My pleasure, my friend π
Wonderful the twists and turns of life!
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Thanks so much, my friend.π
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Nicely said! Bravo!
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I feel like this speaks to me. Beautiful ππ
Delighted to hear that, my friend . Thanks so much.π
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I think this is the best rhyme I have read in along while Brilliant and so meaningful π
I am so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so very much . I really do appreciate your kind words.π
Itβs seems the gods have commissioned you to write specifically for me the past couple of days. Itβs uncanny how what you described here is what Iβm going through now. In the midst of a battle between two internal realities. I canβt tell which is real but I know only one of them is.
Your poems help me resolve the apparent paradox, like the spinning top in the movie Inception.
Iβm very grateful! π
So kind of you to share this with me. Thank you so very much. This truly means a lot to me. Truly appreciate it. BTW, Inception is one of my favorite movies. Thanks again.πππ
So touchingβ¦.
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Nice
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Beautifully portrayed ππ
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The path of life and rebirth Grace! Beautiful!π
Thanks so much, dear Marie.π
I love this! Simple, complicated, complex and beautiful
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.π
I initially didn’t understand the poem until I took my time to read it again, slowly.
Wow! What a poem! So thought-provoking. Brilliant job! Keep it up.
Thank you for taking the time to re- read it. I am so glad you enjoyed it.πππ
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Amazing linesβ€
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That is beautiful.
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Beautiful poem…ππ
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We sometimes forget everything we need is inside of us and can be seen when true inner reflection is comprehended. I really enjoyed that poem since it’s rhythm and flow was very nice π Keep up the great work and thank you for highlighting a topic I enjoy. Take care and all the best.
Thank you so very much. I truly appreciate your kindness. So happy you enjoyed it.π
You are welcome and keep up the great work or inspiring work, I should say. Take care and enjoy your day π
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Beautiful. Really well done and definitely relatable. π
Thanks so very much.π
Thank you for sharing your beautiful soul π
You are so kind. Thank you so much .π
Your poems hit me and made me feel like I was in a different place. I felt taken away and inspired. Iβm so glad I decided to look for more writers on here. Thank you for your dedication to your path and for sharing your soul. πππ
This truly means a lot to me. Much appreciated. Have a wonderful weekend.π
Thank you, Grace, you too. πβΊοΈ
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