A flirty bird,
flapping around,
drawing circles
above my crown.
Whistles at me,
flapping around,
lyrical songs
without a sound.
Looking at me,
flapping around,
cocking his head
staring me down.
Flying away,
flapping around,
as my heart melts
hitting the ground.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
I love this poem!!! And the style of how you repeated the second line in each stanza makes it so unique and bold! The simplicity in your words really makes them shine and come to life! Beautiful work as always, my friend!!! Much love 🖤🤗
Thank you so much, Ace. I am so glad you appreciated the details in this piece! Your supportive words mean a lot to me.❤️🙏
Good job!
Thank you so much.❤️
Totally awesome Grace!!!!
So glad you liked it DebsDragons. Thank you.❤️
Well done Grace
Thank you Mina.❤️
Most welcome my best friend
this was awesome Grace!
…. sounds like some men I know.. lol🤣🤣
Thank you Cindy.Glad you enjoyed and I totally agree 😂
you’re most welcome!💖 🤣
wow, how charming! so lyrical
Thanks so much. ❤️
Beautiful 💖
Thank you so much.❤️
Wow wow
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.❤️