I watched her from afar,
her hair was made of gold,
it shined like a bright star,
and stole my hearts control.
He watched me from afar,
my hair was such a mess.
I tried to hide my scars,
strolled though I needed rest.
I fell under her spell,
her essence left a mark.
Much more than a fine shell,
she held an inner spark.
I felt so insecure,
by what his eyes must see.
Tried hard to feel assured,
let go and “Let it be.”
At last, I took a step,
guided by destiny.
Hoping she could be swept,
by my pure honesty.
My heartbeat seemed to grow,
as he slowly came near.
But with the first hello,
our souls traversed through years.
Flooded by memories,
of times that had stood still.
Skipping through reveries,
and climbing steep dark hills.
While holding a tight stare,
all else soon disappeared.
Nothing was ever there,
everything started here.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
so beautiful Grace!💖
Thanks so much, my friend.💕
you’re so welcome Grace!💖💖
A beautiful love poem, Grace. Gorgeously expressed. ❤️
Thank you so much, dear Jeff. Your comments always put a smile on my face.💕❤️💕
You’re most welcome, dear Grace. That’s lovely to know. Happy Saturday, my friend. ❤️🥰
Happy Saturday.💕❤️💕
🍫 smooth like chocolate.
Thank so much, Selma.❤️
I loved the lovely love story💕💕
Thanks so very much. I’m so glad you enjoyed.💕
Wow! That was a beautiful write!💕
Thank you so much. So happy you liked it.💕
That was so beautifully written, Grace! Magnificent!
Thanks so very much.💕
Pleasure!
It was my pleasure!
Lovely, Grace! I enjoyed the “conversation” between the two; a very creative and delightful concept. Some of the best encounters are the unplanned ones. And what are the odds I have a story from a few years ago with the exact same title! 🌟
That’s so cool.Im so glad you liked it, Nancy. Thanks so much, my friend.💕
Oh, my! What an ingenious concept! Both the sides of the story. I never read anything like this. So so unique! Masterpiece!
Thanks so much, Sam.I am thrilled to hear that you liked it.💕
Today I felt the love an intimacy in these beautiful verses. A lovely blend of words and emotions. Loved it really 💖💐
So happy you liked it, KK. Thank you so much.💕
You’re welcome 🙏
This is a masterpiece dear grace..! I truly loved it..!😍
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
You’re very welcome my dear grace..!✨🦋
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This is a masterpiece! I love what you’ve done with this piece, making it feel like a conversation but not an actual one. This is magical, Grace! Brilliant work, loved it ❤❤
I’m so happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
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This is really great. Thank you for sharing it!
Thanks so much. So glad you liked it.💕
I love the back and forth perspective, seeing it through their eyes and feeling what they do.
Im so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
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