I watched her from afar,
her hair was made of gold,
it shined like a bright star,
and stole my hearts control.
He watched me from afar,
my hair was such a mess.
I tried to hide my scars,
strolled though I needed rest.
I fell under her spell,
her essence left a mark,
much more than a fine shell,
she held an inner spark.
I felt so insecure,
by what his eyes must see,
tried hard to feel assured,
let go and “let it be.”
At last, I took a step,
guided by destiny,
hoping she could be swept,
by my pure honesty.
My heartbeat seemed to grow,
as he slowly came near,
but with the first hello,
our souls traversed through years.
Flooded by memories,
of times that had stood still,
skipping through reveries,
climbing up steep dark hills.
While holding a tight stare,
all else soon disappeared,
nothing was ever there,
everything started here.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Originally Published October 07, 2021

Really impressive 👏 👌 👍
Love your content ✨ 💕 ❤
Thanks for sharing ❤ 👍 😊
Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful love song Grace. I like your brilliant play on the meaning of words: “here” and “there” in the last verse.
So happy you enjoyed it and those lines in particular, my friend. Thank you.💕
You are very welcome Grace!
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Beautifully written.
Thanks so much, Sadje 💕
You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
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Your poetry has a great feel!
Thank you so much 💕
Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thanks so much 💕
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“but with the first hello,
our souls traversed through years.”💓
Thanks, Melissa. 💕🙏💕
I adore the dual perspective, Grace! What catches his eye in appreciation and what she despairs over. Beautifully done! 💞💞💞
Happy you enjoyed it, Dawn. Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕
Well done!
Thanks so much, AC💕
I am with Melissa 💟
Those lines in particular!
The poem is so beautiful Grace💟
Glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much, Maggie 💕
My pleasure Grace ❣️🙏
I did, very much 😊
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Wonderfully written dearest Grace, I missed so much of your excellent work. Hopefully I am trying to be here n read you like before. Thanks for being an inspiration ❤
Do sweet of you, Suma. Thank you so much, dear friend. Welcome back, looking forward to reading your work too. Have a wonderful day.💕
Love this ❤️
Thanks so much, Nicole.💕
so beautiful, Grace 🙏
Thank you, Destiny. Glad you enjoyed.💕
most welcome 🤍
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Beautiful.
Thank you 💕
A beautiful poetic story, Grace! Love the two perspectives❤️💐
Thanks so much, KK. Glad you enjoyed.💕
I did enjoy! You’re welcome 💖
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Fabulous lines, Grace! 💖
“While holding a tight stare,
all else soon disappeared,
nothing was ever there,
everything started here.”
Thanks so much, Eugi. Glad you liked it and those lines in particular. Have a wonderful day.💕
You are most welcome, Grace!
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<3 !!!! So Well Done !!!
Thanks so much 💕
Such a beautiful poem, Grace!!!!❣️❣️
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you.💕🙏💕
i like the interaction between the two persons – it is funny how each person has their own sense of the reality around them.
Glad you enjoyed, Art. Thank you so much.💕