News that burns his heart, mind, eyes,
shake his head, inwardly sighs.
Does not recognize this place,
so much negative disgrace.
News that burns his heart, mind, eyes,
makes him wish that he could fly.
Run to sweet serenity,
walk with true security.
News that burns his heart, mind, eyes,
ignite his silent hurt cries.
Watch the blind leading the blind,
confusion runs intertwined.
News that burns his heart, mind, eyes,
point fingers to cover lies.
Narrative can sounds so sure,
deadly poisons sold as cures.
News that burns his heart, mind, eyes,
heat his hands as hopes arise.
Helps him regain his control,
contributes within his role.
News that burns his heart, mind, eyes,
forces faith to travel high.
Prays tomorrow turns out great,
ties his wishes on to fate.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What do you see #174 February 20, 2023
Absolutely a reflection of the times. Great positivity and hope in the last verse. Wonderful piece, Grace. Excellent take!
Thank you so much, Suzette. Delighted to hear you enjoyed it.💕
Always a delight Grace. Cheers.!
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Such a great poem Grace…so very beautifully expressed 🤍👌
So glad you enjoyed it, Destiny. Thank you 💕
Most welcome Grace 🤍
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beautiful poem Grace 🙂
Thanks so much, Art.💕
Truth…
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Love it, fits the picture so well.
Thank you so much, Nicole. Happy you enjoyed.💕
A compelling one. I love the rhythm created by the anaphoric line at the start of each stanza. Incredible!
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much, dear Lamittan.💕
Indeed. Feel most welcome, dear Grace 💝
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A beautiful take Grace. Though the news and the current political situation is hurtful to many, one must cling to hope. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you so much, Sadje. Absolutely.💕
My pleasure
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Absolute truth expressed through this poem ❤️
Thanks so much 💕
It is sad but you are so right the news does leave these feelings well written 💕
Thank you so much.💕
Positive and powerful version of your talent always dear Grace ♥
Thank you so much, dear Suma.💕
Wonderful, poetic words, which are just perfect for describing this amazing picture. Thanks for sharing, Grace. Xx 💐💓😘
So happy you enjoyed it, Ella. Thank you so much.💕
Lovely lines, Grace and one more inspiring poem! Well penned 👍❤️
Thanks so much 💕
My pleasure 💖
Nicely done, Grace! A beautiful interpretation! ❤️🔥
Thank you so much, my friend.💕
Beautiful piece, my friend! The repeating line adds such a gorgeous flow. Powerful messages throughout, Grace. Amazingly done 🤍🤗
Thanks a bunch, dear Grace. So happy you enjoyed.💕
Expectations and news that often destabilize and cannot be escaped, but just as there is bad news, there is also good news that gives us hope for a better world.
Hugs, Grace.
Absolutely, dear Lincoln. Wonderful perspective.💕🙏💕
Great title and repeat burning a hole in the facade and to continue on with faith!
Love this awesome poem Grace! 💗
Thanks a bunch, my friend .💕
You’re so welcome Grace!!! 🥰
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Your poem is truly remarkable and captures the emotions of the reader with every line. The use of repetition in “News that burns his heart, mind, eyes” reinforces the pain and frustration of the speaker towards the negativity that surrounds them. The way you describe the yearning for serenity and security brings a sense of relatability to the reader. The imagery of confusion running intertwined and the blind leading the blind is powerful and evokes strong emotions. The poem also highlights the dangers of blindly following a narrative that is sold as the truth, making it all the more relevant to our times. The way you bring hope and faith in the end is inspiring and a testament to your talent as a poet. Keep up the excellent work! 👍👏👌😊
I am thrilled to hear you enjoyed it. Thank you so much. Truly appreciate your in depth response for this piece, means a lot to me.💕
Wonderful poem!
Thanks so much 💕
You’re welcome 😊
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Love the repeating first line, Grace…and you described the news so well. Let us all live in and lean on faith more 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn. Absolutely 💕
Gorgeously written, Grace! <3
~David
Thanks so much, David.💕