Pop bubble,
deflate balloon.
Rough troubles,
arrive too soon.
Pain doubles,
inner monsoon.
Clean rubble,
watch blood shot moon.
Bloody words,
escape my lips.
Fly like birds,
that fall and slip.
Look absurd,
clumsily trip.
Visions blurred,
perception flips.
Bled out sounds,
possessed quick tongue.
Left dry mouth,
fled empty lungs.
Tilted ground,
vibrations rung.
Sadness found,
where dreams begun.
Bleeding tunes
ring covered ears,
old thoughts swoon,
to expunge fears,
hopes typhoon
then release tears,
heart cocoons
while feeling clear.
Embrace cares,
fix crooked smile.
Mend despair,
reconcile trials,
Cracks repair,
owns distinct style.
Breathe fresh air,
pure joy compiles.
Blood filled songs,
finally healed,
cure all wrongs,
drop every shield,
thoughts prolonged
until revealed,
truth belongs
to what is real.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 196 July 24, 2023

Brilliant response to the image Grace 🙌
Thanks so much, Angela.💕
Hlly crapola that hit me like a truck! I feel wrung out and relieved alt the same time. Whatcha doin to me lady?
What a wonderful response. Thank you so much. So nice to hear.💕
Your welcome
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Truth belongs to what is real. A wonderful take Grace. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you so much, Sadje. Im so happy you enjoyed it.💕
You’re most welcome
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Excellent piece Grace 👏👏👏
Thanks so much, Gabriela.💕🙏💕
My pleasure hon 🌹
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Grace… this is truly so beautifully expressed.
“truth belongs
to what is real…” 👌🤍
Thank you so much, Destiny 💕
always a pleasure 🤍
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Your poem is a powerful exploration of the human condition, reflecting on pain, perception, and healing. Your words paint a vivid picture of struggle, growth, and eventual catharsis. Each verse resonates deeply, emphasizing the transformative power of acknowledging our realities and emotions. Your unique way of interpreting life’s trials and the journey towards healing is truly captivating.
Best regards,
Abhishek
Thank you so much. So happy you enjoyed it. Truly appreciate your kind response.💕🙏💕
orange sun, bloody moon, time for judgement for those deep deceits and face the responsability of the turmoil, the endless wars and the resources theft, in the family and whole humanity.
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Beautifully brilliant response Grace 💛💛💛
Thank you so much.💕
Excellent take on the prompt Grace.
Thanks so much, Suzette 💕
You are very welcome.
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Skilled and lovely as ever. Relatable yet distinctive 🙏💗
Thanks so much. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Tells an enthralling story…quite vivid descriptions. Love it.🤗
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you 💕
love your great real life take Grace! ❤️
Happy you enjoyed it, Cindy. Thanks so much.💕😊💕
I sure did as always Grace💕
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ANOTHER FAST-PACED CLASSIC—LOVE IT!
Thanks so much 💕
And you are welcome! <3
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<3 😀 <3
So expressive. Had me unravelled for a while. 👏👏
Thank you so much 💕
Quite the journey this takes us on….thank you for the uplifting resolution! 💞💞💞
Absolutely. Glad you liked it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Brilliant take on the prompt, Grace! 💕
Thank you so much, Eugenia 💕
My pleasure, Grace!
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Simply beautiful!
Thank you so much 💕
You’re more than welcome 🙏😘🙏
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A brilliant rhyming piece, Grace! Last two lines touch my heart ❤️❤️
Thanks so much, KK. Happy you enjoyed it, my friend.💕
You’re welcome, Grace 😊💖
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A beautiful and touching take on this interesting image, Grace. I love the last verse, especially. Xx 💖
So happy you enjoyed it, Ellie. Thank you so much.💕
oh wow! You always match the picture so well.
Thank you so much, Belladonna.💕
You’re welcome 💖
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Gale of emotions that are alien to reality. I love to enjoy your poetic verses. I am left with this closing phrase….. “Truth belongs to what is real”.
Hugs in the distance, friend Grace.
Thank you so much, my friend. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
Excellent 🙌🏻
Thanks so much.💕
Nice
Thank you 💕
Powerful images Grace.
Thank you so much 💕