Extending your hand,
when I was alone,
you held me so tight,
then swallowed me whole.
I laid in your heart,
I made it my home,
I lit a bright candle,
then watched as it glowed.
You traveled through space,
navigating time.
Your life was my movie,
I laughed at your crimes.
I tugged at your heart,
whispered all you felt,
igniting your sparks,
the candle then melts.
Lived your adventure,
I peeked through your eyes.
Till one sparkling day,
I tugged at your side.
Exposing deep thoughts,
we laughed till we cried.
We clutched to each other
made life our fun ride.
Apart we dissolve,
entwined we are solid.
Your chest my firm pillow
provides my tears solace.
Form a fairyland
where we can fly free,
wherever we go,
always glow with me.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Beautiful 👌👌
So happy you liked it. Thank you.❤️
Wow , beautiful 🙂💕
Thanks so much, Gayatri.❤️
Wow Grace, this is truly stunning. Such marvelous writing!! The flow is beyond amazing, you are truly the queen of graceful flows!! So powerfully beautiful, my friend. Well done 🖤🤗
Thanks so much for your kindness, Ace. I truly appreciate it my friend.Much love to you.💕
Beautiful flow, and elegant as ever. Lovely, Grace. ❤️🤗
Thanks so much, Jeff.💕🙏💕
You’re most welcome, Grace. Always. ❤️🙏
The Universal promise of being held in Divine love 💖 that’s what this piece evokes. Beautiful my dear Grace 🥰
Thank you so very much Maria Teresa. So glad it evoked such an awesome feelings . I truly appreciate your beautiful feedback my friend.💕🙏💕
This is such a beautiful poem Grace! Loved it so much! ♥♥
So happy tohear that, Sonali. Thank you so much.❤️
Most welcome Grace ♥♥
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A beautiful mesmerising poem with graceful flow! Well penned, Grace👌👌👍
Thanks so much, KK.💕
Woww..! It’s such a heart touching and lovely and beautiful and wonderful my friend..! Sure I will save this to me..! So fantastic..! 🤗🤗
Thanks so much dear Filarance.Your sweet messages always warm my heart.💕
Oh my dear, you are a sweetheart..! It’s all my pleasure..!💕💕
Such a beautiful poem Gracer so beautifully strung💖
I’m so glad you liked it, my friend. Thank you.💕
💖💖💖❤️ pleasure always❣️
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This stanza really really moved me:
Apart we dissolve,
entwined we are solid.
Your chest my firm pillow
provides my tears solace.
So glad it touched you, Benjamin.💕🙏💕
It sure did. Thanks for sharing! 💕
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