Feeling locked up, and so stuck,
trying not to press my luck.
All I do, is done in vain,
accustomed to feeling pain.
Everyday, another chore,
have no strength left to keep score.
Reading thoughts that often shift,
leaves no room for hopes to lift.
Faith arises as hopes lift,
feel vibrations cause a shift.
So relieved, no need for scores,
happiness conquers my chores.
Inner light clears away pain,
as love travels through my veins.
Knowing we make our own luck,
so no one is ever stuck.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Wonderful conclusion, and I very much agree. Dead ends allow us to reflect back and find another alley. 😉
So true, K. Thanks so much.💕
Thank you, Grace.
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.💕
I sat for hours writing 2 poems. Its still not as striking as yours.
What’s the secret, you have to tell me?
Compared to you i am just an amateur.
How to write a poem like Grace does? I will go mad then write on poem a thousand times over just to match your skill against mine.
Wanted to make you laugh. I am not even funny.
Keep up the good work. In a 100 years i will be on your level. Just maybe. 👏🤣 Laughing at my silliness.
Thanks so much, Marvin. That is very kind of you but my advice is to not try to write like anyone else. Just write as it comes naturally for you. Always be true to yourself and you will attract the right people. 💕🙏💕
I love the shift between the two stanzas. Very powerful!
So happy you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
So no one is ever stuck. What a wonderous line that feels rewarding. This is an elevating poem, dear Grace. ❤
Thanks so much, my friend. Happy you liked it.💕🙏💕
Sure. I did. Feel most welcome. ❤
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This is so beautiful poem. Boosts me up and raise my self esteem ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
So happy to hear that. Thank you.💕
No one is ever stuck 🙂. I love it
Thanks so much 💕
I’m glad the view altered for the positive
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Thanks Grace, I really love reading your poems📖😊❤️
So happy to hear that, Joanna. Thank you so much.💕
A powerful poem, dear Grace. I always see myself in your beautiful words. 💞
Thats so wonderful to hear, my friend. Thank you so much. Truly means a lot to me.💕
You’re most welcome, Grace. It’s always my pleasure. 💞
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Your poems are always uplifting, Grace. I love reading them when I need to see things more positive.
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
I love this.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
Everyone indeed opens his own luck. Inspirational❤
Thanks so very much.💕
Welcome💞
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Beautiful inspirational lines if everyone can think so there will be no pain . Well shared 👍🙂
Thanks so much, Priti.💕
It’s pleasure of mine stay blessed ❣️💕
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I loved the format of this poem discarding points one by one raised in the first stanza. Beautifully written, Grace 😊💖
So happy to hear that, KK. Thanks so much.💕
You’re welcome always 😊
Your poetry is always so uplifting. Thank you for brightening my mornings.
So happy to hear that, Joyce. Thanks so much.💕
You’re very welcome.
Such a great poem Grace!
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“feel vibrations cause a shift.
So relieved, no need for scores,
happiness conquers my chores.”
In faith and in love and appreciation always dearest!
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Thanks so much, dear Cindy.💕🙏🥰
of course.. better late than never!! 💖💖
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Beautiful
Thank you💕
Needed this today!! Been feeling a bit stuck lately! Thank you for sharing!
So happy to hear it served, Janice. Thanks so much. I find that at times we feel stuck right before we start running . Best of luck.💕
I like it 😍
Happy to hear that. Thank you.💕
Wow, didn’t see that coming! Love the shift so much. That’s so inspiring, thank you.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
So good 💗
Thanks so much.💕
What would we do without faith! Great pic to go with your poem
Thanks a bunch.💕