Close my eyes,
free from life.
Pull me high
to the sky.
Take me whole,
heart and soul.
Let tears roll,
loose control.
Peaceful flow,
union glows.
Warm breeze blows
love that grows.
Spring me up,
full heart pumps.
Raise my cup,
bliss erupts.
Absorb core,
fill each pore.
Supply more,
open door.
Fly so free,
guarantee,
golden key,
unlocks glee.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Awesome feeling of freedom
Thanks so much.π
My pleasure
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I believe what poetry does is to move the heart with emotion. You nailed it, Grace. π
Thatβs so nice to hear, Suzette. Thank you so much .π
My pleasure, Grace π
This is such an amazing way to paint a picture in my mind of how this feeling feels β€οΈ love it!
So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you.π
Of course! π
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Love this π
Thanks so much π
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Love the flowπ
Thanks so much, Joanna π
Beautiful
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Your welcome
Heavenly poem. Well-written, Grace.
Thanks so much.π
Beautiful rhyming π
Glad you liked it. Thank you π
you are amazing. thank you for your poetry.
Thanks so much π
Even reading it sounds so liberating! Good rhymes too. Have not been here in a long time, hope you are doing well, Grace π
Hi Vignesh. So happy you are back. Thanks so much for the kind response. Glad you enjoyed it. Hope all is well with you too.π
That’s the feeling all have some point of time. Beautifully written, Grace ππ
Thanks so much, my friend.π
My pleasure, my friend π
Oooh, such an uplifting feeling! Thank you for this!
Glad you liked it. Thank you.π
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I love the rhythm of this poem! So beautiful.
So glad you liked it, Belladonna. Thank you.π
You’re welcome!
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Amazing, my friend. I love this one. π
Im so happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you π
Beautiful flow and words in your uplifting poem dear Grace!
Love it!!
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Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you.π