Words that swim around his head,
make him drown in them instead.
Steal his voice, his feelings tread,
remarks tiptoe on a thread.
Convey his thoughts deep inside,
blabbing what he wants to hide.
Caution must be well applied,
felt emotions smoothly guide.
Words that fly over his head
do not land, instantly dead.
Tried to crack behaviors read,
analyzed each phrase once said.
Dictating the things he hears,
break and conquer all his fears,
sad or happy stream of tears,
whisper softly in his ear.
Words that live inside his heart,
made to always feel so smart,
transform into works of art,
always set themselves apart.
They can get him to believe,
that same power could deceive.
Building what he will perceive,
help him gain all goals achieved.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
I love how it builds like a storm cloud, growing and unfolding into such beauty!!! BRAVO
That is so nice to hear , dear Eleanor. Thanks so very much.💕
Masterfully created, dear Grace. Beautiful rhyme, with a lovely message. Just gorgeous. ❤️❤️
So glad you liked, Jeff. Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕
I did, indeed, very much. Welcome bunches, Grace. ❤️❤️
Oh wow, this poem had a cinematic effect on me…slowly building up & then this huge sound…beautifully written, Grace…is what I’m actually saying ✨
I’m so thrilled to hear that, Navin. Thanks so very much.💕
You’re welcome, Grace 💫🤍✨
Marveling at the effortless flow! Beautiful! ❤👏👏
Thanks so much, dear Aaysid.💕
I really like this.
So happy you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
I love it <3 you thread lines nicely Grace. Always a pleasure to read 🙂
So happy to hear that O.D. Thanks so much.❤️
You’re welcome 😀
That was well written and beautiful!! Really loved it. Great emotions and meaningful ❤
So glad you enjoyed. Thanks so very much.💕
Thanks so much, N.D.💕
Are you on instagram madam
Yes ,though not too active but am planning on revamping it soon. 💕
I love how you’re able to express it all so perfectly without losing the flow in your poems. It’s not easy to make it sound like that while also bringing out the emotions so well. You’ve mastered the art, Grace! This really grew on me as it progressed further. Really beautiful and positive message ❤
Thanks so much, AB. I’m truly flattered and appreciate your kindness.💕
Always a pleasure ❤
Excellent work with the rhymes. Must not have been easy creating an entire stanza having the same rhyming sound. Amazing!
So happy you liked, Vignesh. Thank you.💕
Brilliant piece! Loved ever line. So elegantly wonderful! 👌💕
Happy to hear that, Sam. Thanks so much.💕
Thanks so much.❤️
Another masterpiece, Grace. Beautifully crafted verses with perfect rhyming and flow.👌💐💖
Thanks so much, KK.❤️
You’re more than welcome 🙏
Beautiful!!! some really brilliant stanzas in this poem
That’s so nice to hear. Thank you.💕
you’re very welcome!
AMAZING, my dear Grace! What a stunning piece filled with so many universal lessons! Exquisitely done! I love the rhyming flowing throughout this piece and the powerful ending. Another masterpiece, my friend 🖤🤗✨
Thanks so much, dear Ace. I truly appreciate it, my friend.💕
Story of power and self acknowledgement, sounds deep and awesome my friend. 💞🌹
Thanks so much.💕🙏💕
Totally awesome. It’s not easy to do that but you do it expertly. Love it, Grace. Superb, my dear.
Thanks so much, Selma.💕
I think this is the best I’ve seen till now.
Thanks so much.💕