I just may be, too naive,
giving to seldom receive,
mixed emotions interweave,
confused by what I perceive.
Loving those known to deceive,
empty feelings never leave,
always try, never achieve,
forgot how to just believe.
Never doubt, born to believe,
destined to always achieve,
fulfillment will never leave,
laugh at what tries to deceive.
Life happens as I perceive,
good and better interweave,
feeling worthy to receive,
optimistic not naive.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
a beautiful poem dear Grace but I beg to differ with you.. you are always giving with a huge heart my friend!!! πππ
Thanks so much, dear Cindy.Trying to show two perspectivesβ¦lolπβ€οΈπ
Oh yes it’s true and you do it soooo well. you’re welcome ππ
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Damn…Switch is the perfect name…you’re burning everything into flames…the lines of yours create your lane…the words you form are very deep…the rhyming is cool & pure insane…I was reading this piece as the word spoken β¨π₯β€οΈπ«
I am so happy you enjoyed, dear Navin. Thanks so very much for your wonderful feedback. So motivating. I appreciate it.πβ€οΈπ
You’re welcome, Grace β¨β€οΈπ«
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switching to better thoughts always a good thing.
Thanks so much, Art.πβ€οΈπ
Love the switch! Brilliant!β€
Thanks so much, Aaysid.πβ€οΈπ
My pleasure.π
A perfectly crafted and delivered paradox. This is stunningly beautiful, Grace. I love it. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Thatβs so nice to hear, my friend. Thanks so very much.πβ€οΈπ
Youβre most welcome, dear Grace. Always. β€οΈπ₯°β€οΈ
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Love it.
Thanks so much.πβ€οΈπ
Wow! I liked this so much. Absolutely beautiful!!β€β€
Thanks so much.πβ€οΈπ
Highly motivating life switch , I feel now it to be a pre-reqisite for transiting thoughts to positive modeππ
My friend , a perfect pieceππ
Thanks so very much, my friend.πβ€οΈπ
Wonderful. The jump from a ‘struggle’ in the first stanza to ‘belief’ in the second stanza is very nice π
Glad you liked it, Vignesh. Thanks so much.π
That is so captivating and lovely Graceβ£β£
Thanks so much, May.πβ€οΈπ
Very nice grace madam
When come on instagram madam
Thanks so much, ND.I am planning on it soon.π
I see what you did there. Nicely done!
Thanks so much, my friend.π
Life is like that. The last line is perfect. And perfect rhyming. Good one, Graceπππ
Thanks so much, my friend.π
So welcome, my friend ππ
Beautiful. Saving. π
Thanks so much, K.πβ€οΈπ
Youβre most welcome. π
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Never doubted your words, the line words kept pulling me closer, you are amazing π
Thatβs so sweet of you to say and so nice to hear. Thanks so much.πβ€οΈπ
Anytime β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ
Good twinning of words.
Thanks so ,much.πβ€οΈπ