Twinkling star,
filled with such hope,
removing scars,
balancing slopes.
Felt near and far
energies soak,
lighting a spark
forming a cloak.
Shimmers so bright
shiny hearts sing,
glowing at night,
making ears ring.
Exudes pure light,
sways as it swings.
Gleaming insight,
unknotting strings.
Touch the dark sky,
leaves a clear hue,
blinking so high,
creating views.
Faith driven eyes,
form what is true.
Wishes all fly,
for me and you.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Wonderful. 🙂
“Exudes pure light,
sways as it swings.
Gleaming insight,
unknotting strings.” I love this! Unknotting strings, the phone autocorrect hates it, but I love how simply original your use of words is
Thanks so much, my friend.I truly appreciate your kind words.Glad you liked it.💕❤️💕
Ahhh, what a blessing to read you this evening, dear Grace. This poem is magic and the last stanza is glorious. Grateful for you, and your work, my friend. ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much. my friend. This truly means a lot to me.💕❤️💕
You’re welcome, Grace. Always my pleasure. 💖💖💖
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Beautiful as always, Grace. 🙂
Thank you so much, Mike.💕🙏💕
Profound lines…magical touch…the rhyming is stunning…I’m in awe ✨❤️💫
That is so nice of you to say, Navin. Thank you so much. i truly appreciate it.💕
You’re very welcome, Grace…keep shining & rhyming your divine being ✨❤️💫
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‘Felt near and far
energies soak,
lighting a spark
forming a cloak.’- Absolutely beautiful, grace!!
Thanks so very much, Shruthi. So happy you liked it.💕❤️💕
You’re welcome!
Beautifully written!! I loved the beautifully vivid imagery you created with your words!! Awesome❤❤
Beautiful. The night sky is always a sight to behold. The stars only make it better 🙂
So true. Thanks so much.💕❤️💕
Wonderful , I enjoyed the flow which for me is the most adorable part ,❤️❣️
Happy you liked it. Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful lines, as always, with rhythmic flow. The last two lines are superb…Wishes all fly, for me and you. Well penned, Grace👍💐💖
Glad you liked it, KK. Thanks so much.💕❤️💕
You’re more than welcome 😊💖
Wonderful as always Grace, magical. ♥️
Thanks so very much, my friend.💕