Negative thoughts hunt restless minds,
awaken pains buried inside.
Happiness falls so far behind,
life is perceived, souls pick a side.
A restless sleep wrestles all night,
dark foggy thoughts serve as a guide.
Peace runs away from this cold fight,
chaos takes aim as doubts kill pride.
Depression haunts all wise insight,
sorrows and anger are applied.
Hopelessness shades what once seemed bright,
removes pure hopes, joy, sheer delight.
Stands on a bridge to find delight,
attempts to focus on what’s bright.
Strong inner efforts are applied,
concentrates on profound insight.
Conquers hardships to regains pride,
realizes peace could defeat fights.
Allows spirit to truly guide,
can finally sleep through the night.
Launches himself to touch both sides,
dry ashes cascade far behind.
Feels positive ignite inside,
as serene bliss consumes his mind.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 227 February 26 , 2024


Wonderful. You remarkable insight into the journey from challenge to victory reads so beautifully in this personal journey of the soul. Lovely work and great take on the prompt. Spectacular poetry, Grace!
Thanks a bunch, Suzette. I am thrilled to know you enjoyed it, my friend. Truly means a lot to me. Have a wonderful Tuesday.💕
You are most welcome Grace. Happy Tuesday, to you as well.
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very touching one
Thanks so much 💕
Love the concepts standing in the bridge to get perspective that’s awesome!
Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed.💕
A beautiful journey of thoughts from negative to positivity. A lovely poem Grace. Thanks for joining in.
Glad you enjoyed, Sadje. Thanks so much. My pleasure.💕
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Good one, Grace. Well-written verse.
Thanks so much, Nancy 💕
Poe vibes🪁🌓
So sweet of you. Thank you so much.💕
Brilliant writing Grace💕
Love it 👏👏
Thanks so much, Maggie 💕
My pleasure Grace 🌹❣️
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Brilliantly told Grace.
Thanks so much 💕
So vivid and insightful. I love how it is a journey from light into dark. Well done.
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I love your poetic response to this prompt Grace. Beautiful my dear. 🤩🌙🥰
Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕
You are so very welcome my dear Grace! 🥰💖😍🥂😎
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these journeys from and to…so well expressed, Grace….a wonderful flow🤍
Thanks so much, Destiny. Glad you enjoyed.💕
pleasure always 🤍
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It is always a delight to enjoy your lyrics.
Greetings and hugs from here, Grace.
Thanks so much, my friend. Hugs to you too 💕
Such a beautiful poem of hope for restless minds, dear Grace! I soooo wish I could infuse this magic dust to some clients I’m working with right now.. xo❣️
Thanks so much, Cindy. I know what you mean.💕
You’re so welcome, Grace.. there’s always a few hold outs❣️🙏🏼
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Beautifully explorations of a mind freeing itself from negative influences.
Thanks so much. 💕
Lovable 🇿🇼❤️🇿🇼❤️
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I love the triumph you’ve illustrated here, beautifully done, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn. Happy you enjoyed 💕
A poetic journey from gloom to bloom! So inspiring, Grace! Well done 👏💐💖
Thanks so much, KK. Happy you enjoyed.💕
I did enjoy. You’re welcome 💕
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This is a beautiful poem!
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You’re welcome!
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Very welcome!
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Wow. 😯 impressive as always Grace. Beautiful.
And I do love that pic. O happy weekend.
Thanks so much, Selma. Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Happy weekend to you too.💕
A beautiful poem of recovery ❤️🩹
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Loved the way this had the reverse effect., the parallels between the two stanzas. Really skilful and creative writing. Color me impressed , Grace. 👏👏
So happy you enjoyed. Thank you so much.💕
You’re welcome. 🤗
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Nice
I like how you convey the progression from darkness to light, from chaos to serenity, with such depth!
~David
Thank you so much, David. I’m so happy you enjoyed 💕