Foggy fall day,
leaves on display,
subtle self doubts
inwardly shout.
Every mistake
shook her awake.
Hope this season,
highlights reasons.
Is life a hoax?
mirage of smoke?
Is there a cure,
for the obscure?
Eyes seem so blind,
clues hard to find.
Truth in plain sight,
scared to be right.
All is her fault,
inward assault.
No one to blame,
or need for shame.
The real purpose,
for this circus?
A fun playground,
that spins around.
Never alone,
fulfillment shown,
Love acts are kind,
ease hearts and mind.
A balanced breeze
flows with great peace.
gained self-control,
twinkles her soul.
– Grace Y Estevez – Reddy
Written for FFFC #201 hosted by Fandango
Beautiful writing you share with us, friend Grace, a personal search in the multiple universe that is presented to us daily.
Hugs in the distance.
Thank you so much, my dear friend. Truly appreciate you. 💕🙏💕
I like your contrast with the mists of uncertainty and the clarity of self awareness. Marvelous!!
So happy to hear that, Suzette. Thanks so much.💕🙏💕
Always a delight Grace. Have a great rest of your day! Cheers.
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Absolutely beautiful. We all have a quest that we go on through life, but we never know where it will lead us. Thank you so much for sharing, Grace
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.💕
You’re very welcome 😊
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Well put – we all have days like these <3
Thank you so much. Absolutely 💕
Beautifully written 🌹
Thank you so much 💕
Beautiful Grace!
Thanks so much 💕
Both the poem and the image are what I just needed. Thanks!
So nice to hear that. Thank you so much 💕
A truly immersive and beautiful poetry piece it really speaks to the soul and touches my heart ❤️
So nice to hear you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
that was a great conquer, dear friend. lovely piece. 😄❤️
Glad you liked it, my friend. Thank you 💕
Your words match the picture prompt in such a perfect yet unique way! Amazingly written as always, dear Grace. Absolutely love the flow here 🤍
Thank you, Grace. So happy you enjoyed it. Hope you are having a wonderful day.💕
Busy but productive, you’re sweet to ask! Hope you’re week is going well 🤍🤗
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The word play and the story is immaculate.
Thank you so much 💕
No problem!
Beautiful Grace 👏👏👏
Thank you so much, dear Gabriela.💕
My pleasure hon 🙏🌺💫
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Such a great poem Grace! I love the imagery and the questions of life posed. Superb write! 💞
Thanks so much, Cindy. Happy you enjoyed it, my friend.💕🙏💕
“A balanced breeze” Such a peaceful concept! Love this poem, Grace!❤️🌸
Thank you so much, Aaysid. So glad you enjoyed.💕
I loved the wordplay in this poem, Grace.
Thanks so much 💕
I really loved this one. Just awesome.
Thanks so much.💕
What a lovely poem.
Thanks so much, Sadje. Glad you liked it.💕🙏💕
You’re most welcome
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Grace, I love how flexible you are with your rhymes, using off-rhymes when they work best! So good 🙂
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David
That’s so nice to hear, David. Thank you so much.💕
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Loved the poem Grace!!💖🥰
Thanks so much, Kriti.💕
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I really felt this line…”All is her fault, inward assault”…I’ve been there TOO many times. I love the way you turned it around in the last 2 stanzas. Beautifully done 💞💞💞
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much, Dawn.💕
Beautiful ❤
Thank you 💕
A nice take, Grace! Thought provoking questions. The last stanza is superb.👌💖
Happy you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
Always a pleasure 💖
Great poem and goes so well with the picture.
Thanks so much, Belladonna.💕
You’re so welcome!
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Beautiful imagery and superb word play, Grace!💖
Thanks so much, Eugenia. Happy you enjoyed it, my friend.💕
My pleasure, Grace!
Wowwww..I love it
Thanks so much.💕