Gone too long, back home at last,
journey reconciles the past,
memories, brought back great smiles,
fuchsia skies follow for miles.
Pathways transform into slides,
brightly colored magic rides,
cross the bridge, tears left behind,
lessons learned wrapped in deep pride.
Old wounds transform into stars,
shine above erase all scars,
ugly times swiftly buried,
rosy sun rays chase worries.
Suddenly life feels so well,
create tales others can tell.
close both eyes, absorb glories,
open them, write new stories.
Insight blooms visions are clean,
heart consumes this gorgeous scene,
inhale this magenta view,
fully rise, strong and renewed.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Melissa Lemay’s Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge #258


So beautifully expressed and written Grace 💜💜
Thank you so very much, Maggie. Glad you enjoyed.💕
My pleasure always Grace 💜
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Very beautiful.. Grace, it sounds like a trip of realization, comprehension and closure of things left open.
Thanks so much, Karima. Glad you enjoyed.💕🙏💕
How do you think up these brilliant anologies?!!…”old wounds transform into stars” totally awesome writing as always Grace. Brava!!
So sweet of you, Suzette. Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.💕
A pleasure Grace! Cheers.
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I really like the line Suzette mentioned, and these too: “close both eyes, absorb glories,
open them, write new stories.”
Thank you for writing for the prompt!🤗
So happy you enjoyed. Thanks so much. Truly my pleasure.💕🙏💕
What an inspiring poetic response to this prompt Grace! Beautiful my dear! 🌞🌉🤩
Thank you so much, my friend.💕
My pleasure Grace! 😊💖🥰
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What an uplifting poem! Thank you.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
Such a beautiful poem Grace.
Thank you so much, Sadje.💕
You’re most welcome
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A great write, Grace! 💟
Thank you so very much, Nancy 💕
Always a pleasure! ☺️
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LOVE!!
Thanks so much 💕
As always inspiring message in your poetic feeling. Hugs, friend Grace.
Thanks so much, my friend. 🤗
Awww Grace I love this!
Thanks so much, Belladonna 💕
You’re welcome!
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Lovely analogy and imagery, Grace! Old wounds transform into stars.. well said, my friend! An inspiring poem 💐💕
Thanks so much, KK. Glad you enjoyed.💕🙏💕
Truly my pleasure, my friend 💕
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I love the build up and crescendo of everything coming together in perfect harmony. So beautiful, Grace❣️💓
Thank you so much, Cindy. Glad you enjoyed.💕
Of course, I always do❣️
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Lovely
Thank you 💕
Lovely 😍😍
Thanks so much 💕
What a beautifully written journey, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn 💕