Memories
can often sink.
Anchor them down
with lasting ink.
If poems form,
recite out loud.
Closing both eyes,
notice a crowd.
Some will absorb
the lines you say,
then process them
in distinct ways.
Try to touch hearts
that can relate.
Spreading pure love
erases hate.
Allow the words
to paint feelings,
hope they provide
massive healings.
An unknown phrase
may release fears
Clear obstacles
and keep light near.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Gorgeous again!!!
Thatβs so nice of you to say. Thank you so much.πππ
I liked the opening words. Memories cqn often sink. This is true our memories can sink, and i think this is was created inside us by God for our sake, because the man sometimes needs to forget his memories and if those memories are not forgotten, our life might be hurt.
Thank you so much, Mina. I see your point. Thanks for sharing. I truly appreciate your kind and thoughtful feedback, my friend.β€οΈ
Hope i succeeded in my point of view, and i would be more than happy if you re explain your point of view, because you are the author
Your point of view is great , Mina. We all process things differently and thatβs what makes us interesting, which I mention in the third stanza.
In the first stanza, Iβm referring to how many memories are kept in the subconscious but have a consistent presence that is easily accessible when needed.πππ
This is amazing, dear Grace!!! I absolutely love it and totally resonate with each word. Wow, itβs so thought provoking, poignant and perfectly said!!! Youβre seriously like the queen of flow because each one of your pieces has such a beautiful, dreamy and unique flow thatβs such a joy to read!!! Keep shining, my amazing friend. You inspire me π€π€
Thank you, Ace.So happy to hear that it resonated with you. I truly appreciate your kind words and support so very much. Youβre a one of a kind gem, my friend.Much love to you.πππ
That is a lovely poem, dear Grace. I love the concepts and imagery you create with your verse; and, that last stanza is magical. Beautiful. β€οΈπβ¨
That is so nice to hear, Jeff. Thanks so much.πβ€οΈ
So beautiful πβ₯οΈ!!! Stay blessed my dear ππβ€οΈ
Thank you so much, Diana. Much love to you.πβ€οΈ
Lovely! This made my day! <3
So nice to hear you liked it. Thank you.β€οΈ
Lovely poem! Beautiful thoughts!!
Thank you ,KK. Happy to hear you liked it.πβ€οΈ
I like this. Welldone Grace
Thank you, Dera. I truly appreciate it.β€οΈ
This is an excellent piece my dear friend. Beautifully written ππ
I’m so glad you liked it, Suma. Thanks so much my friend.β€οΈ
Pleasure is all mine to read your beautiful thoughts dear one β€
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Wowwww! It is such a wonderful piece dear grace! I loved it. Keep rocking!π
Thank you so much, Filarance.β€οΈ
Most welcome! Its my pleasure!π
Yes to words and lines that heal and connect us all together!
I love this poem very much Grace β€οΈ
So happy you enjoyed it, Marie. Thank you.πππ
So simple to read, but very very pleasing! Gorgeous π
That is so very nice to hear.Thanks so much.πππ
My pleasure π
You make it so simple and direct, this is the answer and you know what to expect. So well written, nice piece of work.
That is so nice to hear, Gary.Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind feedback.I truly appreciate it.πππ
Your so very welcome, you are truly amazing.
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I keep coming back to this. Such a lovely poem π
That is so nice to hear, Vignesh. Thank you so very much for your sweet comments and support, my friend.β₯οΈ
The pleasure is totally mine π
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Just so lovely
Thanks for sharing.
I wish you miracles
Thatβs so very nice of you. Thank you.πππ
I love the light in all of your writing, Grace. I feel the hope and calm joy in your words. Thank you.
Thank you so much. That truly means alot to me.πβ€οΈπ
Itβs true. You share a light that my present darkness misses and still longs for.
That light is in you too. Sometimes it just needs a slight reminder so that it shines.Thanks again.πβ€οΈπ
It’s beautiful and so touching
Thank you so very much. I am so happy you enjoyed it.π